 reychop 2008-04-04 . chapter 5I have been lazing around and feeling tired, but depressing stories always cheer me up (don't know why). Actually, I could just mark your story as a favorite to show that I liked it, but I just needed to review. You're story is great and I pity that no one reviews. (maybe they were just so speechless because of the awesomeness of your story? Hehehe)
Well, I really enjoyed this one and I cant find any faults with the grammar and events in the story (if there are any, then they are lucky to go unnoticed by my ever watchful eye. LOL! Or is it just that I was too carried away by the drama and scenes in your story?) Anyway, Love your story and I was hoping to read anymore like this.
Oh, I almost forget to tell you. The never-wilting lily reminded me of the Beauty and The beast. You know that rose?
Well, a random comment, ignore if you want. I just wanted to congratulate you for a job well done. There are a lot of angst stories out there and not one had managed to cheer me up and liven up my day. I hope you'll write an even sadder story to further lighten my mood. XD.
I hope to see you in your next story. Until then! |