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ciararocks
2005-08-12 . chapter 17
Absolutely loved your story The Difference! I have spent the last couple of hours sitting here reading every word from start to finish! Can't wait to start reading Life Was Perfect! (By the way, so glad you are writing a sequel!)

I also plan to read that Harry Potter story of yours, it sounds cool!

Keep up the brilliant writing!
ciararocks
2005-08-12 . chapter 12
Lol. Love the humour interspersed with the drama! I hope I don't get to the end of all the chapters so far and find that you've finished writing this for good! 'Cause it's just like Ciara! (heehee, in other words it rocks!)
ciararocks
2005-08-12 . chapter 11
Lol. Love the brocolli comments!
I bet Marissa has to live, because you have said that you love the characters too much to split them up, so I doubt you'd led them die!
Anyway, I should really keep reading! Heehee
ciararocks
2005-08-12 . chapter 8
Heehee, I am soo gald I started reading this once you'd already written 17 chapters! Ha! Now all I have to do is click a button, rather than waiting anxiously, constantly checking the site and my emails for any updates!

Cool story by the way, but it seemed a bit weird that Ryan would tell the court of Trey's history, and how he thought that he probably would show aggression, when he was trying to back up the 'defense of others' claim. That was a really confusing sentence. What I mean is that Ryan going to see Trey when he knew Trey could be aggressive could count as provoking him, therefore meaning that it could still be viewed as an illegal fight because Ryan was aware that this could happen.

Anyway, in saying that I almost forgot that I still haven't found out Marissa's verdict! Probably reviewing again soon.
ciararocks
2005-08-12 . chapter 5
Another cool chapter, loved Seth's reaction! Lol.
It's gonna be interesting to see Josh Schwartz's take on the whole Marissa shooting Trey thing. I reckon she won't go to jail on the show. Anyway, enough of my show hypotheses!
I know Ryan has lied in Marissa's defense before, but usually it's playing up what he's done, as opposed to saying that he wasn't breaking the law.
Anyway, I should really leave my reviews till I have read the whole thing! Lol
ciararocks
2005-08-12 . chapter 4
Cool storyline so far, yet it seems a bit unrealistic, such as:
- the fact that Marissa's pregnancy test came up positive when it hadn't even been twenty-four hours yet. Doesn't it take about two weeks to be able to tell from a cheap pregnancy test like that? Also, I don't know much about it, but presumably things like the emergency contraceptive pill prevents pregnancies rather than terminating them, so surely she couldn't be pregnant already? Unless this was deliberate? I suppose I'll just have to keep reading!

- Marissa getting bailed out of jail. for a start, I thought she wasn't going to tell them anything until Sandy was there, so how could the police have already charged her with murder? Plus, surely they wouldn't let someone out on bail if they were charged with murder?!

But anyway, great story and I am going to keep reading now, and keep up the good work!
Frida Vaccari
2005-08-11 . chapter 17
great fic i loved it
Rainygal
2005-08-02 . chapter 14
Oh, very cute chapter!! i love sappy stuff! lol, (i don't know if i mentioned it in my last review but i've been away, i was just ignoring this fic! lol) but no, only one more chapter :( that sucks! I'd love a sequel btw! update soon x
emzylou
2005-08-02 . chapter 16
Wow, what an amazing story!

Im v. sad its finished :( :(

Cant wait for the sequel!
iluvryan
2005-08-02 . chapter 16
yay! great chapter! your're story was so amazing!
kursk
2005-08-01 . chapter 16
Good last chapter, I`m glad that they`re getting married and that kandy is going to support them, I just hope that for the sequel the angst will be less and ryan will be succesful, so money won`t be an issue.

Maybe they could have more kids, like SS should.
I-Believe-In-The-Butterflies
2005-08-01 . chapter 16
Awesome! It was so cute at the end, and I can't wait until the sequel.

Your welcome for reviews! Only for the best!

You ROck! -J

Keep writing!
Lil Miss Vixen
2005-08-01 . chapter 16
aw! that was a really sweet ending. I'll be waiting for the sequel.
Dogsbody
2005-08-01 . chapter 16
What a pleasant ending.
GalootMaster
2005-07-30 . chapter 15
ah Target a place of reunons! Anyways great story! I lvoe the R/M keep up the good work!
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