Yeah, this story's been complete for over two years, but...I just had to drop a review because this is so..epic. I've only read up to chapter three, and yet I can feel that this story is poignant and unique...both acute and thoughtful of the sentiments behind a father-daughter relationship, that of leaving a family member behind, and that of coming home. Your character is so endearing. It's as if she was born into the Naruto world with the right of belonging.

Ahh that was so cute! It's a very very good story, and I hope you have a sequel up or are planning a sequel. :) Best story I've ever read! :D

wow this was an amazingly good story, I loved it, though there were times I was confused, mainly when a character would start to say something or said something in such a way that the other character understood without more information but I didn't still...

You are just amazing. This is the type of story that gives me a warm feeling inside of me. I have read this a million times, and never get tired of it. This is a true fan fiction classic, and even if fans don't like these types of stories, they will still appreciate. You have a gift, I will bet my silver on that.

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i just wanted to thank you for posting such a beautiful story.
I have recently started reading Naruto fanfictions and out of al of them i favor this one the most. i even stayed up till 3 am to finish reading this wonderful story.
:-)
most of the other fanfictions i read are really cheezy and the characters are completely different from the stories and in my opinion you had the most realistic chracters.

The first thing I can say about your story is: WOW!! I absolutely enjoyed your writting level, the rhythm of the actions, the way you developed the characters, and by the very first time in all my experience with fanfiction, I loved the Original Characters more that the "borrowed" ones. You made a great team 7, Katana is amazingly well built, Ichigo and Takashi as well, but Katana is the best of all.
So, thanks for that amazing story!

Awesome! :D... Not much else to say. ... Nice ending... Awesome. Anyways one of the best (And longest) fanfics I've read. I regret nothing! :O Well byes ^^

Hi again! :D Just finished Chapter 5 ^^ I like how you use Nightwish as it is one of my favourite bands. Well it was just that

Sup'. I just started reading your story today... I must say splendid work! :-D It's quite good... And I've only read the 2 first chapters. But not to be a douche or anything but I noticed a mistake in chapter 2, that I thought you should know about. You write about The Valley of the End and say that the 2 statues are the 1st and 2nd Hokages. But it's actually statues of the 1st Hokage and Madara Uchiha, to show that their epic battle happened there. Well thanks for the story though :D I'll start reading it again now :3.

See ya!

This is by far, the BEST Fan Fiction I have ever read in my life, and will continue to be, im sure of it. Good Job!

this was an amazing story! :D
you're a very talented writer. i loved the new characters that you created, especially Katana. You gave all of them such unique personalites.
i also liked the plot and your characterization of everyone especially sasuke.
great job with this. it was a joy to read. :D

I know that you probably will never read this, but that was the best fanfiction I've read in a while. I kept having to remind myself that you weren't Kishimoto, that a lot the characters weren't actually in the manga, and that this story doesn't fit in with the storyline.
But you got me back into Naruto again, that's for sure!
Thank you!

Interesting. I normally dislike OC stories, as most do, but this one kept my attention. What I liked about it was the Naruto/Sakura relationship. I've never quite heard that take on it, and I think it's a realistic possibility. Thanks for sharing.

Well, by all means this fic should be a typical Mary Sue style fic that's bad...but it's not. On the contrary, it's really really cool. Loved it. I read another story like this ages ago and I've always liked the idea - Sasuke having a daughter and sending her back to Konoha thing.

Well written and good characterization. Good concept/idea. I liked the way you did expand on Katana's teammates Takashi and Ichigo - they weren't just sorta basic characters filling in the gaps. Sakura/Naruto's relationship was really interesting too.

Nice work!

`Jarik

Excellent story, thank you! I greatly enjoyed reading this.