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| QueenLonelyness 2006-01-09 ch 6,  | abuseReally good. At first I wasn't sure if the run on sentences would work, but they did. Great piece! And I got that the chapters were drabbles. You said that in the beginning. Too bad for those who didn't get that. Anyway, great work! Keep it going! |
| QOTU 2006-01-09 ch 6, anon. | abuseReally good. At first I wasn't sure if the run on sentences would work, but they did. Great piece! And I got that the chapters were drabbles. You said that in the beginning. Too bad for those who didn't get that. Anyway, great work! Keep it going! |
| QOTU 2006-01-09 ch 5, anon. | abuseOhh this is good! You need to make this longer! I want to know what happened and what will happen! Amazing work! |
| Dakt37 2005-10-02 ch 5, | abuseYes, I realize that this series of drabbles is like 4 months old, and you're probably not reading the reviews for it anymore, but I was reading this particular drabble while listening to my S Club 7 CD (shut up! I think they're cool!) Anyway, it was this really sad song called "Have you," and some of the lyrics include "Have you ever loved and lost somebody, whish there was a chance to say 'I'm sorry"... I'd write the whole song, cuz it's all really very relevant to this story, but that would take too much effort on my part. So long story short, (too late!) I think there must've been some cosmic forces drawing together that song and your fic. Um...yeah. Keep up the good work! |
| mairi 2005-07-15 ch 9, anon. | abuseoh, you were right... #9 just left me breathless. Thanks! |
| Sillie 2005-06-17 ch 9, | abuse*sniffles* That was beautiful... |
| jewelbaby 2005-06-16 ch 9, anon. | abusewow You had me crying I love this drabble series. please keep going. |
| * 2005-06-16 ch 9, anon. | abuseI've read all of the chapters in like one go, and I'm addicted. |
| Sillie 2005-06-14 ch 6, | abuse*sniffles* That was so, so sweet... Poor Nicky. |
| Sandra Solaria Dees 2005-06-14 ch 7, | abuseI really like these, but just one thing makes my eye twitch. Greg speakes Norwegian, not Swedish. His family is from Norway. I hope you write more! |
| ShinodaBear 2005-06-13 ch 6, | abuseLoved the last one. Brought tears to my eyes. And I love SpeakingSwedish!Greg, too!:) Great job on these. |
| Caster 2005-06-12 ch 4, | abuse*claps and celebrates* Huzzah! Another chapter! ^_^ I really love this story. So cute and fun! ^_^ And the supply closet? Warrick finding them? Awesome bits and pieces that form another great chapter. Can't wait for the next part! |
| Jewelbaby 2005-06-10 ch 4, anon. | abuseMore. This is way cool |
| ShinodaBear 2005-06-10 ch 4, | abuseVery nice set of drabbles. Esp. the last one. I can't wait to read more, if you have them. :) |
| Caster 2005-06-09 ch 3, | abuseHuh? *looks around* No reviews? How can you not have any reviews? I *love* this. So cute, smart, short, sexy. Please update soon, yes? I adore every word of it. |