I'm not normally so into poetry, but I really liked this. Especially the wording.

Tha was so hot! Satoshi and Krad should do it! YAY!

Heya. I gotta admit, i'm loving Krad right now. And when i Read this i remebered a picture on Deviant Art that would go REALLY well with this.

how can dai-chan DO that sato-kun and dai-chan are PERFECT for eachother i mean like HELLO!krad, dude get OVER yourelf you are meant for DARK not SATO-KUN!
but i gues the whole krad raping sat-kun then brusies welts and crap all over his body and neck sum bruising in the face and dai-chan aking and dark going like SUSPICOUS liek and crap is okay ^^

wow...

i just stared at my screen for a bit afer i finished..

this is really excellent-dark and powerful

Oh yeah, Krad is VERY weird XD
Krad : >.>
*pats him* Aah, but you're sexy, too, don't worry. You'll always be my favorite psychopathic blonde.
Krad : ... that's only because all the other psychopaths you like are brown- or blue-haired >.>
Yup. But YOU are blonde, and that makes you special. You happy now? ^^
Krad : ... okay, fine enough.
^^ Good. Now, that poem was very close to Krad's character (cause really, what do we know of him - besides that he's psychopathic and blonde - ?) and I liked it a bunch ^^ I don't like poems usualy, but this one was nice.

Oh, how beautiful! I love how you portrayed his personality so perfectly with this. Just like Krad, this poem is very beatiful, very disturbing, and very old-fashioned shown by your use of "shall" instead of "will". This is the best poem I have read about Krad and I have read a lot.

o! My Poor tormented Satoshi! Daisuke how could you?! *sob* Krad has issues ^0^! LOVED IT! It made me go "o" not many DNAngel fic do that! I'm so happy! thank you so much for making this fic! It's so pretty... in a Krad sorta way ^0^

Very well done.

The second we put 'Krad' and 'poem' in the same sentence, we know something bad is going to be happy. He was born to be insanely lyrical, that man.

I liked how it didn't rhyme. Despite my firm belief that Krad would adore all nursery rhymes, this wasn't the type of thing that should have rhymed. Or so I think. And then you went through all of our favourite colours, blue, black, white, and of course red.

A point of critism is that you 'will.' I know, I know, nit-picking, but here it is: Krad, not only because he's very archaic, but because he's very definite, would more likely use 'shall'. Because 'shall' is a word that conveys more certainty than 'will,' because will implied want and shall implies need.

Most of all... me, I liked Krad's sweet little promise there at the end. It's endearing, in a homicidal way. Conveyed Krad's... Krad-ness very well. ^^

yup sexshay he ish! ook...thank for reviwin my story and i liked it...nya! heh keep up good work...