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| Katlin Grace 2008-09-01 ch 4,  | abusePlease continue! It's great! I'm anxious to see how this develops. |
| FJKLSDJ 2007-04-07 ch 1, anon. | abusePLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
| hatami 2006-11-05 ch 4, | abuseho this is a great fic update |
| ... 2006-08-22 ch 1, anon. | abusewhen are you gonna update this? |
| killing anime girl 2006-07-19 ch 3, anon. | abuseGREAT! Please write more! |
| The REAL Bunny Aino 2006-07-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseAwesome job with this fic, Sami! Keep it up! To whoever is posing as me : cut it out! I do not know why you are posing as me, but it is just plain RUDE! Whoever you are, I never did anything to you, so why you are targeting me, I have no idea! Oh and by the way Sami is not the one who needs to get a life, you do! If you're using all your time to flame my friends and pose as me, then you obviously have no or very little social life. -The REAL Bunny Aino |
| Bunny Aino 2006-07-03 ch 3, anon. | abuseThis story sucks. Go get a life. |
| lalala 2006-07-01 ch 4, anon. | abusegood job update soon |
| koldy 2006-06-29 ch 4, | abusekol |
| Airlady 2006-06-29 ch 4, | abuseThis is very well written - both the plot and the characters. Perhaps you could give us background information on the death of Usagi's mother. |
| Annoymous 1234 2006-06-29 ch 4, anon. | abuseVery Good story so far. Are the names of the stepmother and stapdaughter for a reason or you just doing that because u feel like it? |
| Shin-Ora 2006-06-29 ch 4, | abuseThis fanfic is amazing and beautifully written. The details and the words you use are very capitivating. I even read these four chapters over again to check if I missed anything while reading the first time. I've got to admit, in the last chapter I shed some tears. This story isn't emotionally over-bearing, but I share most of the feelings and thoughts of this Usagi. I've gone through alot as a child, more than most other children, but through that pain I've made strength. So, the way you've made Usagi, in some ways, is the way I see myself. I cannot wait to read your next chapter! Keep up the awsome work! |
| Fallen Dragon 2006-06-29 ch 4, anon. | abuseLovely ficcie! Please update soon! Its always nice to read HP/SM stories. |
| Usagi Asia Maxwell 2006-06-28 ch 4, | abuseEh? An IB class? *GASP!* Are you still in high school? Eegads! If you're still are, and are able to write like this, you've got a hell of a lot going for you! o.o I emean... You've seemingly mastered first-person perspective. I know it seems like a stupid thing to point out, but so many people have problems with it. Since it's the way everyone starts writing in grade school, because it's the way we all think, a lot of people use it immaturely (I know we weren't allowed to use it very much after third grade... Formal writing, pah!) Anyway, I really love this. ^_^ I think it might be my favorite of all your stories on the site. ^_^ It shows genuine promis. ^_^ There were a few times during the second chapter, where it elt like it was about to become a bit too melowdramatic, but I find no faults at all with these last two. I think you've come a long way. :D Can't wait to read more! bye! Asia |
| endless.eternity 2006-06-28 ch 4, | abuseHey! Another beautiful chapter to add to this cunning story. :) I hope to see another update SOON!! Love always, Grace* |