awsome! i luv this fic!

Oh my… A brilliant story about a great character from an excellent anime. I really loved it. Congratulations !

man i wanted ed to die. i lke stories where people die

Very nice. Good second-person is hard to do, but you pulled it off nicely. Still, I think Ed was a little OOC. Ed always tries to do something, even if he can't (like his mom, and Nina). Things do matter to him.

your amzing! i love it it just soo sad!

I like it its really good *nods ^-^ I would love to read more angst stories like this!

-Kin

Wow. You were right. That story is super angsty. But that's why we read this stuff. We're curious, and we love it, right? ^_^ Well, that's true for me, anyway. Awesome, keep it up. Write more angsty stories, you're great at it. And Ed IS full of that tragic vibe. I mean, SOMETIMES he's angry and/or cheerful. But it's that angsty side that we all love, right? It just makes you wanna hug him...*sniff* C Ya and Thanx.

I completley agree with you about FMA; it's the most amazing show I've ever seen! ^^ *bounces excitedly* I also adored your fic, you wrote it so awesomely! I loved the way you described Ed's feelings, that was amazing! :D Awesome job, thanks so much for writting this! ^^ At first I was confused by the second personess, but I really ended up liking it. XP *nods* Great job again! *high fives* :D

The imagery was great and the second person point of view made me feel like I was the character. I was really able to form pictures in my mind of what you were talking about. It was awesome keep writing!

That was WONDERFUL!

aw! sadness!>

Oh, wow 0_0 That's original...*claps* Wonderful! I loved how you portrayed Ed's feelings useing the rain and silver and gray, very well described and the imagery was wonderful *puts story on faves* Beautiful job ^^ Keep it up!

My first thought... Pretty *.*

The imagery was really nice. It gave a view on what Ed was going through and in a way that is not usual. Ah yes, the advantage of writing for a character that is not openly angsting.

The colors that you used were perfect for the story. At some points it even makes you wonder what has sent him into such a pit of dispair (did Al die?), but then you find out that Al is alive. Still in a suit of armor, but alive.

In conclusion, you should write more for Full Metal Alchemist since you did so well with this one. At least that is my opinion and probably the opinion of anyone else who has read this story.

That was awesome.

it was sad dark just the way i like it. relly good. i luv it. rock on and rite more fics like this one!

CPDA