Hi Mercedes Aria,

So happy to see that you have continued this great story. Very good start. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Mercy

Well Mercedes, this certainly is an interesting beginning. Nice prologue; brief, simple, with enough of an eye-catching ending to get people interested. Worked for me. Hooked. Keep up the good work, I hope you tell us who is getting married in the next chapter. Until next time.

Remmy