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Tenebres d'Eden
2009-11-25 . chapter 13
Yes, please continue the story. :)

It's one of the most profound Naruto fanfics I've ever read, and Ch. 13 really makes the plot and theme comes full circle (or foreshadows such an occurrence).

Thank you for your wonderful work ~
skepsis66
2009-11-22 . chapter 13
Absolutely incredible! Amazing! You epitomize Naruto's obsessive love for Sasuke & Sasuke's love back. Both of them, they're so single-minded, strong but weak and argh! You made me cry! I've really come to despise Hinata now lol. So selfish in a selfless kind of way if you get what I mean. She still sees Naruto as some kind of God, is blind to parts of Naruto that are so integral to his character. She, Sakura & Tsunade have locked away all the passion and endless drive and spirit that characterizes him. It's sad that such love can be so destructive. And Sasuke, you've got to feel for the poor guy, though he did bring some of it on himself. Gorgeous writing - I think I'm in love!
Earthborne
2009-11-21 . chapter 13
Aw man, you can't leave us with that cliffie! Such a cute fic, stumbled upon this while perusing my old favourites. Read it through again, and I am /still/ astounded by how good and heart-wrenching it is!! :3

Please update, I miss this so!
chintsuuzai
2009-11-16 . chapter 13
I haven't lost interest o/
Azzizarukas
2009-11-15 . chapter 13
amazing amazing! this has always been my absolutely favorite story of yours. It's so emotional, insightful, and poignant. I'm always on the edge of my seat waiting to see how everything will play out, and I love the convoluted/messed up relationships. Keep this up please please!
dirtygirl42
2009-11-14 . chapter 13
I just read it start to finish and I loved it. I can't lie though - I skimmed through a lot of the flashbacks. I think it would've been easier for me to read if they'd all been together. (I know that's boring and everyone does it, so don't change the fic lol) I'm especially enjoying how realistic the relationships seem. SasuNaru is definitely a toxic relationship in many ways, but at the same time really beautiful. You're doing a great job capturing that and Hinata's desperation. Please continue soon!
passionflower
2009-11-14 . chapter 13
I really like this chapter, especially its ending.
Looks like Amoto is becoming more and more Naruto's and Sasuke's son, doesn't it?
The relationship between Amoto and Sasuke is so interesting, I'm curious how it will develop. Will Sasuke ever see Amoto as Amoto and not as a substitute for Naruto?
Caineyamiyasha
2009-11-11 . chapter 13
Amazing! I still love this story and I have been fallowing it form the beginning! Don't stop the love, this is a great story and writing.
TsumeHikaru
2009-11-10 . chapter 13
really good story!
RMT
2009-11-08 . chapter 13
DON'T YOU DARE STOP WRITING THIS!! It's so amazing, and I can't wait to see another chapter! You're writing is absolutely awesome (and I love how you had Amoto say to Sasuke what Sasuke had said to Naruto in their past). Keep up your excellent work, you fans wait for another update!
Keritsu
2009-11-08 . chapter 13
Please don't say people have lost interest. Because I haven't! :(

It's been a while since you have updated. And I did have to trail back a few chapters to find out what was going on again. =)) But, please, please... Don't stop writing even if it will take you a while longer to finish this. Out of all your other stories, Give You Back is really my favorite. :((

This chapter had a few errors (I'm talking about the technical ones) here and there. You may want to reread just so that it would be a chapter you would be satisfied with. There's something about the tragedy of this story that really draws me to it. It's so... sublime and not overdone. You have a knack for this atmosphere.

Good luck writing and I will be watching closely this time. :)
Mary-sama
2009-11-04 . chapter 13
I was waiting so long for an update I thought you would never add another chapter.
Every moment I had to think; before I go to sleep, every 10 minutes brake from work I thought about this fic.
I was trying to find a way for them to get back together but I couldn't because Naruto is too nice, obsession or not, to throw everything away for Sasuke.
Even in the Manga I don't see how it's possible and for that I started to dislike Naruto.
Nice Naruto is in character but it's annoying. I wish that just once he'll tell everybody to shove it where the sun doesn't shine and kill them all >D
I used to like him because he was an underdog but now he's so boring (he talked a guy to death, ffs!).
I like your fic and the way you made Sasuke but even here I can't understand why does he bother with someone as useless as Naruto.
Lavi Lane
2009-11-02 . chapter 13
splendid. do not worry. if u have no one to write 4, u can write 4 me. xD i will always be ur supporter. i really wanna see how this ends.
Peachi Bunni
2009-11-02 . chapter 13
I still do care about this fic! It's true that I haven't seen it around in a while, but I still enjoy it all the same. Sometime, what little kids say, you just want to reach out and strangle them, don't you? Maybe it's just me. Me and Sasuke. So Naruto, I guess, in a predicament. I mean, he has Hinata knocked up, a son already, and Sasuke out there, ready for him. Oh the choices. Preferrably, I'd go with Sasuke. I mean, Naruto was in love with him, and everybody else blocked it away... That was unfair. So it's really up to him... You. C:

Can't wait for the next chapter!
spang141
2009-10-30 . chapter 13
wow! it's been so long since this was updated, and i'm stoked that you did because this story's awesome! keep up the great work!
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