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Caineyamiyasha
2009-11-11 . chapter 13
Amazing! I still love this story and I have been fallowing it form the beginning! Don't stop the love, this is a great story and writing.
TsumeHikaru
2009-11-10 . chapter 13
really good story!
RMT
2009-11-08 . chapter 13
DON'T YOU DARE STOP WRITING THIS!! It's so amazing, and I can't wait to see another chapter! You're writing is absolutely awesome (and I love how you had Amoto say to Sasuke what Sasuke had said to Naruto in their past). Keep up your excellent work, you fans wait for another update!
Keritsu
2009-11-08 . chapter 13
Please don't say people have lost interest. Because I haven't! :(

It's been a while since you have updated. And I did have to trail back a few chapters to find out what was going on again. =)) But, please, please... Don't stop writing even if it will take you a while longer to finish this. Out of all your other stories, Give You Back is really my favorite. :((

This chapter had a few errors (I'm talking about the technical ones) here and there. You may want to reread just so that it would be a chapter you would be satisfied with. There's something about the tragedy of this story that really draws me to it. It's so... sublime and not overdone. You have a knack for this atmosphere.

Good luck writing and I will be watching closely this time. :)
Mary-sama
2009-11-04 . chapter 13
I was waiting so long for an update I thought you would never add another chapter.
Every moment I had to think; before I go to sleep, every 10 minutes brake from work I thought about this fic.
I was trying to find a way for them to get back together but I couldn't because Naruto is too nice, obsession or not, to throw everything away for Sasuke.
Even in the Manga I don't see how it's possible and for that I started to dislike Naruto.
Nice Naruto is in character but it's annoying. I wish that just once he'll tell everybody to shove it where the sun doesn't shine and kill them all >D
I used to like him because he was an underdog but now he's so boring (he talked a guy to death, ffs!).
I like your fic and the way you made Sasuke but even here I can't understand why does he bother with someone as useless as Naruto.
Lavi Lane
2009-11-02 . chapter 13
splendid. do not worry. if u have no one to write 4, u can write 4 me. xD i will always be ur supporter. i really wanna see how this ends.
Peachi Bunni
2009-11-02 . chapter 13
I still do care about this fic! It's true that I haven't seen it around in a while, but I still enjoy it all the same. Sometime, what little kids say, you just want to reach out and strangle them, don't you? Maybe it's just me. Me and Sasuke. So Naruto, I guess, in a predicament. I mean, he has Hinata knocked up, a son already, and Sasuke out there, ready for him. Oh the choices. Preferrably, I'd go with Sasuke. I mean, Naruto was in love with him, and everybody else blocked it away... That was unfair. So it's really up to him... You. C:

Can't wait for the next chapter!
spang141
2009-10-30 . chapter 13
wow! it's been so long since this was updated, and i'm stoked that you did because this story's awesome! keep up the great work!
miyabita yami
2009-10-30 . chapter 13
i read this story awhile ago so I'm very happy to find it again so so please don't give up on it and continue because its a really good story, very interesting and well writen so please don't stop writing.
anon
2009-10-28 . chapter 13
Wa, Sasuke hates Amoto now. No! They were my favorite pairing!
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2009-10-28 . chapter 13
Flicker of...revulsion? What the? Still interested...but it has twisted and turned long enough...Update more often! I want more! Go rosesareblue!
Metric-Love
2009-10-26 . chapter 11
that was a great drawing of Amoto.. so damn adorable =P

this chapter was definitely happier than the last one which is nice ;)
Metric-Love
2009-10-26 . chapter 9
i'm kinda scared to continue.. i can't see how this story can end happily at all, i ultimately want sasuke and naruto together of course but what of amoto, naru's unborn child, and his position as hokage

please make this story have a happy ending.. i get really unsettled and depressed when a great story ends on a sad note, it's like the story ends up haunting me..

the anime NANA was one of those stories.. it's amazing but i couldn't even finish the series with the way it was going.. it was on my mind for more than a week, and every time i thought of what happened i'd start crying.. it was really bad =(

i only ever cry during stories.. and i'm fine with crying as long as it ends happy
Metric-Love
2009-10-26 . chapter 8
i can't tell what naruto is making of sasukes love for him :-/

based on the end of this chapter i'm getting the impression that it is't "real" love but of an obsessive conquest or something

i'm not really getting it lol i'm confused

really good chapter though.. the part where present day naruto starts crying actually made me cry
Metric-Love
2009-10-26 . chapter 7
Yay his memories returned!! =D
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