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| Katlynn888 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseAngsty? yes. overly angsty? no. I love this! really I do love, love, love! And, my mom is yelling, about...Aretha Franklin? Okay, then... loved it! -Lynn |
| SarcasmIsMe 2006-06-20 ch 1, | abuse*hugs greg* that was great work. |
| niikii 2006-03-13 ch 1, | abuseaw! poor greggo! i loved the fic tho...still poor greggy! |
| Padfoot4ever 2005-06-10 ch 1, | abuseGreat job! Keep up the fantastic work! |
| Cathleen18 2005-06-10 ch 1, | abuseIs it completely weird that my hip hurts now? ctx :D |
| Read300300 2005-06-10 ch 1, | abuseOh... very nice! This was my first CSI fanfic ever, and I'm very pleased with your work. Jeesh, I may have to make this my new fandom if all of the stuff here is as good as this. You've definitely caught my interest. By the way, I hate to nit-pick, but there was one part where you said "I was even weary of you when I first met you;" the grammatically and contextually correct word is 'wary,' not 'weary.' Weary implies tiredness whilst wary implies caution. That was the only mistake I could find, and then I only noticed because that mistake is one of my pet-peeves. Other than that, this story was beautiful. Truly amazing. I loved it. |
| hotaruchan2002 2005-06-09 ch 1, | abuse*wipes away tear* That was really beautiful. I loved it! |