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Katlynn888
2008-02-03
ch 1,
abuseAngsty? yes. overly angsty? no. I love this! really I do love, love, love! And, my mom is yelling, about...Aretha Franklin? Okay, then...

loved it!

-Lynn
SarcasmIsMe
2006-06-20
ch 1,
abuse*hugs greg* that was great work.
niikii
2006-03-13
ch 1,
abuseaw! poor greggo! i loved the fic tho...still poor greggy!
Padfoot4ever
2005-06-10
ch 1,
abuseGreat job! Keep up the fantastic work!
Cathleen18
2005-06-10
ch 1,
abuseIs it completely weird that my hip hurts now?

ctx :D
Read300300
2005-06-10
ch 1,
abuseOh... very nice! This was my first CSI fanfic ever, and I'm very pleased with your work. Jeesh, I may have to make this my new fandom if all of the stuff here is as good as this. You've definitely caught my interest. By the way, I hate to nit-pick, but there was one part where you said "I was even weary of you when I first met you;" the grammatically and contextually correct word is 'wary,' not 'weary.' Weary implies tiredness whilst wary implies caution. That was the only mistake I could find, and then I only noticed because that mistake is one of my pet-peeves. Other than that, this story was beautiful. Truly amazing. I loved it.
hotaruchan2002
2005-06-09
ch 1,
abuse*wipes away tear* That was really beautiful. I loved it!
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