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| InkyManipulation 2008-05-12 ch 9,  | abuseThis story is really cool! I love the drabbley style you used, it really suits it. Inky |
| Amethyst Evangeline 2007-03-19 ch 9, | abuseWow, I just found this story and it's awesome! So, I guess this is a Hatori x Tohru x Akito, story? I can't wait to read more! This story looks very promising! Please update ASAP! *alerts* ~AmEva |
| dishrag-chan 2007-02-01 ch 9, | abuseFirst of all, I just want to say that I should be asleep right now. Either that or getting ready for school. But this was so worth it. You have the characters so IC, yet so OOC (don't ask how that can happen) It's great! GO TORIRU FOREVER. Though...I'm a bit weepy...I think my love of Akiru and Gureru is coming between my love for Hatori/Tohru...no! It muct not happen! Never! I really like the vagueness too. Gack, I'ce just noticed you haven't updated in a year. Or nearly a year. Gah, update! Please! And update Folding Cranes, too! Us Toriru lovers are floundering with no fuel, here! |
| Suteki31392 2006-08-09 ch 9, | abusethanks for incorporating (I use that word too much) Shigure's dark side, while also giving him loyalty to Tohru. I really, really want more please! |
| CharliexGirl 2006-07-26 ch 9, | abuseShort chapters, but gosh. I know from experiance that it's so much easier to update. o_o;; This is a good story! Good plot and everything. |
| chiisana-inori 2006-05-16 ch 9, | abuseVery nicely done! :)I loved the closing scene. It was well-tied up yet open for the possibilities in the next chapter...which I'll review on time if it kills me! ^^;; ~Chii |
| Lucinda the Maid 2006-05-01 ch 9, | abuseWoah... Death holding the house in its palm really brings to mind the very first chapter of the story, where Akito longs to crush the bird in his hand. Very chilling and poignant... just what I've come to expect from you. And yet I really appreciate the Toriru at the end. Tohru and Hatori's relationship was portrayed as very... fragile. Innocent, almost. I like to think that they've progressed so much as this fic has moved forward, but that they're essentially the same. ^^ Yay for me finally reviewing! So terribly sorry I took so long. But if I do say so myself, this sweet interlude was... well, just that. I'll stop my ramblings now. Can't wait to see more of this, as well as the next chapter in "Folding Cranes!" 'Till then! |
| Ami 2006-04-26 ch 7, anon. | abuseWhat langauge were you speaking? Anyway, it was AWESOME! I really, really liked it! |
| Ami 2006-04-26 ch 5, anon. | abuseShigure likes Tohru? |
| Ami 2006-04-26 ch 4, anon. | abusereview or flame? Anyways I liked it! But still feel sorry for the rest of the Sohmas. Hm...well, anyways, it was cool!! |
| Ami 2006-04-26 ch 3, anon. | abuseI think Akito and Tohru would [Will?] make a good couple!! |
| Rose of Death 2006-04-17 ch 9, | abuseaaw isn't that nice you MUST update soon |
| Samurai Girl Suzu 2006-04-17 ch 4, | abuseWAHAHAH THIS ROCKS |
| Samurai Girl Suzu 2006-04-17 ch 2, | abusethis is excellent! can't wait to see what happens! |
| Adi88 2006-02-06 ch 8, | abuseAhh! Why are there no updates? Mean person. Mean. I'm all on tenterhooks. If that's how you spell that... anyway, I really like this story and your writing. |