| Reviews for The Bet That Started It All |
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asga 8/21/05 . chapter 8nice chappie XD |
B0nz-Ein 7/8/05 . chapter 7Hey Realli great fic i hope you get lots of reviews and i also hope you update soon B0n |
kryuzei 7/3/05 . chapter 7whoa... Slow it down will you ? you make the story a little too fast.. oh well, guess you're the author. Just keep it up ok ? |
AndaisLu 7/2/05 . chapter 1Have u ever seen the movie 'She's all that' cause this sounds kinda like that movie. Still good though _ |
no secret is too safe 7/1/05 . chapter 4Yodel... Blinking...That was...interesting. Blinks Aw...I'm going to have to finish reviewing later, because I was conned into going to see 'Rebound' with some younger friends. Toodles, Cassie. Maybe I'll talk to you later? |
no secret is too safe 7/1/05 . chapter 3Hideo hello...Get an editor! This really has potential minus the errors. By the way, I'm loving the Chiharu/Rika and Yoshi/Yamazaki fighting...they're so funny...and Tomoyo- stop thinking so much! Silly girl...focus your time into really seducing the guy! Hem...moving on...bounces away |
no secret is too safe 7/1/05 . chapter 2Hullo again...well...again with me and my spelling/grammar obsession, and is it me or is Eriol really O.O.C.? Blinks Oh well. I think it's Syaoran though...hmm...Liar he is so afraid of his dear little Sakura...snickers Oh well, the plot's progressing nicely. Skips to Chapter 3 |
no secret is too safe 7/1/05 . chapter 1- Hey! I heard its your birthday today, from Gabby a.k.a amethyst sweet angel. Happy birthday! (Sorry if I'm mistaken..O.o) Yes, she referred this story...and I will review every chappie! w00t, w00t! Beside the few grammar/spelling issues, me like. See ya in chapter 2! |
kaurama-kasuki 7/1/05 . chapter 7kaurama-kasuki: well, thi- Eriol: wah! TOMOYO! wah! sniffsniff... wah! kuarama-kasuki: Oh, will you please! It's your fault! Eriol: Hey! I know I made a mistake but I regret it now! I really do. I LOVE her! kaurama-kasuki: sigh. I know, I know... Now, leave me alone to finish my review. Eriol: sniffsniff. WAH! You stupid, mean, horrible reviewer! kaurama-kasuki: Argh... SHUT UP! SHUT UP! Eriol: STUPID reviewer! kaurama-kasuki: argh... hey, look! It's Tomoyo! Eriol: Where, where? kaurama-kasuki: Right there! Now run! Go after her.. Eriol: ALRIGHT! kaurama-kasuki: hihihi.. i'm such a bad girl... Well, anyway finally, I could right my review... What I was going to say, before the Eriol interrupted me. This story, I find interesting. I really think it's so- Eriol: You're such a liar! How dare you.. That wasn't Tomoyo! kaurama-kasuki: Yeah, yeah. Well you were annoying me. I needed to finish my review. Eriol: ALright then! Continue your review... kaurama-kasuki: Thank you! Now, what I was going to say was you make really COOL stories, especially this one... Eriol: No way... It can't be cool! It's NOT COOL! I hate it! kaurama-kasuki: DON'T SAY THAT! Just because Tomoyo broke up with you- Eriol: WAHAH! kaurama-kasuki: Argh... ANyway, you have to admit. This story was cool... and it gets better and better! Eriol: BETTER! Tomoyo and I broke up... How can it be better? Sakura: Hey, Eriol! You're too noisy. Syaoran: We could hear you voice from afar man! kaurama-kasuki: huh? Will you please just leave me alone! Sakura: You know Eriol... This annoying reviewer is right! This story is cool... way COOL! Syaoran: It always gets better too! kaurama-kasuki: right, right! Eriol: Hmph! As long as I can't be with MY Tomoyo- kaurama-kasuki: QUIET! I said it's good, so it's good! Eriol: WOAH! Calm down, man... I mean girl. Yeah, alright... it's good.. Syaoran: Shheesshh... What an ill-tempered reviewer. kauram-kasuki: OH! I give up! I'll leave now! Sakura: What? Well then! I know this is what kauram-kasuki would want to say... UPDATE! Syaoran: Yeah... annoying reviewer will be waiting... Eriol: I don't care! Update or else! And Tomoyo should be- Syaoran: Shut dude! Sakura: sigh... well... that's that... |
GabbyAbby 6/30/05 . chapter 7okay okay me is reviewing you know I love your story right? Since I read it like a billion times! LOL Happy b-day! well it's tomorrow but that's not the point your story is really good shame it's almost done, I hope that you continue to write, your stories always cheer me up since they are so funny! I wish I could write funny stories but I can't oh well I'll stick to my mushy/sad/weird stuff ne? Keep up the good work! amethyst sweet angel |
asga 6/30/05 . chapter 7nice i read last 3 chapter all together update |
moonscout11 6/30/05 . chapter 7oh my, what's going to happend next? please update! _ lol |
stephie 23 6/29/05 . chapter 7not bad. good chapter. bit more interesting, umm.. for the tip.. go into more detail, rather than rush through the story. for example the prom .. it went really fast.. and the bet seemed to be less important ... even though it was the centre of the story... |
smooth-as-a-smoothie 6/29/05 . chapter 2okay, it was pretty good! was this based loosely on 'she's all that'? the bet thing is kinda like the bet in the movie! Anywaym cant wait ti read more and good job! Toodles |
kryuzei 6/29/05 . chapter 6hey, why do you spell Syaoran "Syaron" or was Syaron is someone else than Syaoran? but I think the last chapter kinda boring I like 1-4 chapter more.. (no offense) |