wow, really good. i liked how everything was just a dream and he is now going to try and make that real. :)
is this going to stay a one shot??

So sweet.

That is so sad. And very realistic and in character. I feel so sorry for Satoshi... Argh it's so frustrating to see him suffer so much in the show.

By the way this was an amazingly written and very sweet fan fiction. I really, really love the ending. And the concept of the whole story it self is really interesting and it has a lot of truth to it. As much as it sucks, life; in reality, truly isn't fair.

o.o That was...really good. Nice job on finding that quote and I want to compliment you on your descriptions. They were extremely good.^^ I also like that part on the end, leaving it off with Sato having that realization of his dream. It sounded like him but at the same time it didn't if that makes any sense. It was...perfect.^-^ 10/10. =^-^=

That was so good.

This wonderful! You are a great writer! Update soon!

Hello! I've already read this fic, but I've decided to review it. (Do you know how hard it is to type with rubber gloves on?!)

Augh, it was so angsty! And sad... I pity Hiwatari-kun. (The fluff was kyoote, tho.)

Anyways, I didn't really notice any convention mistakes, good job! The detail was wonderful, it seemed real and I could picture everything perfectly. It was very in-character, I congratulate you on that.

Well... I think that's really all I can say. It was a great fic, I hope to see more from you! Keep it up.

~O-K

Hoorah for flangst! ... which is a really odd word. But a fun one.

Hm... I did like the beginning. But this is because I'm more angst-fully addicted than I am fluff-fully addicted, although it is a close call. It was almost like a frame narrative, as it went from angst to fluff to angst again, which is always fun.

And the dream! A utopia, if Satoshi knows any. Very much like him. I think you captured Satoshi's desires well in this. ^^

Wow. this was AMAZING. I absloutly love it. You are a great author!

... angsty fluff and fluffy angst are the best. ^_^ I liked how you portrayed Satoshi - poo-oor him T.T Waking up with his back bleeding and his eyes crying and thoughts of hurt Daisuke filling his head TT.TT

kawaii...me liked...thanks for reviewing meeh..i think i may have thankd u already but oh well...

Cute! That was so sad, but so kawaii at the same time. You have an extreme talent for fluff! Heh. In personal opinion I think the ending might have been a little better if it weren't all in italics. I dunno why I think that, I suppose I just do. ^^' Oh well. I didn't notice any spelling or grammar mistakes, which is commendable. I'm sad to admit, I rarely read fics that have a rating lower than 'M'. -_-' But for once, I dunno why, I decided to read this. I'm glad that I did! I think you've convinced me to read more fanfics that are below that rating now, as well.
I'll try to cease rambling now. ^^'
Overall, I enjoyed it! Not extremely long or anything, but not so short as to be dull or confusing. Nicely done. ^^
~ Kyoko