you have to update, this story is to good to stop. if you don't have any ideas try something where ulrich, jeremy, odd and aleita try to bring back her memory by taking yumi to her favorite places like the factory and kadic. Also because Yumi has been in a coma for so long and didn't go to school, she'll have to take clases, but she's to nervous to go back to school so Jeremy, Odd, Ulrich and Aelita teach her along with her parents. Come on, there are so many ways you and I could go with this. IT's not that hard you just have to use your imagination, pretend you're yumi, write how you would feel if you were in her shoes. Just please, please, please, please, please, please, please update!

NO! this story is like the best! needs more chapters! haha sorry if i sound demanding but really! its an amazing story and i really want to continue reading!

Aww man, u aren't finishing it. I bet I know y, it's because u hated the idea of putting Yumi in a 3 year coma. Don't worry, I didn't hate it, I was just a little surprised.

Wish u good luck on ur upcoming stories...but I wished u could've continued this one.

please finish the story im begging you. i need to find out what else happensbetween yumi and ulrich. email me if you are going to finish it. my email adress is

aww, it was a good story, but i understand. i havent updated my stories in a while either.

cool please update soon

Update soon!

so is it finished already?

it was getting really REALLY good!

i love it! to bad she didnt remember the pic of her and Ulrich together...

that was awesome!

*reads again* yep, that's Jenn alright. xD

it's kind of weird, really. you can tell who writes a passage by looking at the style. my pieces ALWAYS (and I mean ALWAYS) have at least a little bit of humor in it. I don't know why, I'm just comedy savvy. :3

don't worry about hiatuses and whatnot, everybody has a life to deal with.

E. The first thing I noticed was my username in bold. And I'm like, "Wait... what?" And then I was like, "OH." But yeah, it wasn't that great, so no praise is needed. :] EFGH, I haven't emailed you in such a long time.

how sweet

POOR YUMI!three years are so long! I hope she'll remeber about Ulrich...UPDATE SOON!

I'm an "UxY" fan, if you don't understand!

p.s.:i'm italian ,so i'm sorry for any errors in this review!

Well, first suggestion is when you choose a POV, stick with it. Don't stray from Third to First. It distracts the reader a lot.

Second, just realize that the whole Coma/Amnesia thing has been done before...alot. Maybe not in this fandom, but in others. I mean, this is playing out to be Days of our Lives: Lyoko. I'll keep reading it because it's decently well written, but I would urge you to strive to set yourself apart from the other fictions of this genre.

Kodra