Hey! I can't believe you finally updated! Yippie. Well, onto the review: well, this chapter was marvelous, as usual. it was so sad. i hope hallie's alright. I wonder if it'll be somekind of turning point for hallie, either negativly or positivly... or maybe it'll be a chance to let them all get closer together- brought together by tradgety/trauma... well i can't wait till the next chapter. i hope it'll be less depressing... it made me sad.. yeah i said it already. but don't take it as criticism... we all need some sadness in our chapters. hear's hoping for some fluff! much love and continue with this story... and thank you so much for the reminder to read;; i probably wouldn't have noticed, since a lot of my stories are updating now. but i read and reviewed... i hope everyone else reading this will also review cuz this is one amazing storry. byee!

me

great chapter!

update soon

lisa

Hey! finally you updated! so happy. well i really love it. james was being sweet. i wonder what deflated his ego... maybe i'll find out.. or maybe now. I liked how james was holding lily wen they were at st. mungos. cuz lily can like think back to it and all... are we ever going to find out what went on w/ the bullet in hallie's arm? um and the part where they can't make the bleeding stop kinda reminded me of dumbledore *sniff* he drank the green potion in book 6 ya no... damn, maloys evil. well i gotta go now... but update soon! maybe look for my story in a while. it's called finding hapiness in the darkest corner. it's not up yet cuz i wanna get some chapters written before i put it up but' ive got like 1 1/2 done. so yea... muchos lov me

quite apart from attacking someone, malfoy should get into trouble for using magic outside of school.

this chapter reminded me of the time that i fainted...though it wasn't from the loss of blood. i was dehydrated, stopped breathing, and clocked out. stupid of me really...i should've guzzled more water. and i should've swooned around some hot guys, but it's not like i had control over myself, anyway. :)

i think hallie's alright.

please update soon. could there be a little bit of action with S/H/R in the next chapter? please? i'll eternally gratefl to you :D. i like it a lot.

omg that was so good

plz update soon

lisa

Please get together James and Lily. So far there are few are Lily's POVs. And updatte!

sorry, this review was long in its coming...

my eyes are much better now. and, of course, it does make sense that wormtail would have to be somewhat attractive to hang with the marauders. they do have certain standards, after all.

what else have i not said?

hm...i really like the name hallie. it sounds good and it looks good in print.

...and poor wormtail didn't get his own little drabble in this chapter. well, you know what they say...it's the quiet ones you have to watch out for.

seriously.

Sirius likes Hallie? That cannot happen cause Remus does too! I like where this story is headed.

hey, it's been a long time! lol. well you're the 1st on my list to update so it's all good. well it's sweet how they put their thoughts about the girls they like into paragraphs like that. nothing really happened so far so not much for me to comment on thought i'd like to add that i'm really glad that none of them think of their respective girl as something screw then dump, ya no. it makes them really sweet. well i gotta go now, but i hope you update soon with more stuff. maybe the next chapter will be the same xcept with the girls' thoughts? i dunno if that'll work though, cuz i don't think that either of them are sure about their feeling to the marauders. o and that reminds me. how i said last time that i'm glad that they hang out a lil(like going swimming). i was rereading the 5th book b4 the 6th one came out (it was awesome, wasn't it?) and anyway, when harry talked to remus and sirius about snape's worst memory, either remus or sirius replied to harry saying but she really hated him (james) w/ "seems like it didn't it?" i saw it as hinting that really she didnt'. lol well this review is nice and long. sorry bout the random rambling. bye anita

hello

I really like this story very much also the pairings

update soon

arh bless they are all sad

whos ur fav maurander?

update soon

lisa

Wormtail in a swimsuit...

AHH! My eyes! They burn!

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Nice chapter, by the way. How long do you think this is going to be?

hey girl! happy birthday! awesome chapter! and i'm glad you didn't make petr out to be an ugly betraying prick... keep it up! post more soon!

hey this fic is realli gd is it gonna just be ova the summer or at skool? by the way happy bday