But they cant...you know HAVE IT? Lol isn't pikachu a little young to be having it? lol GREAT story.I kove pikachu in love it's so funny, although I thought she was a boy all this time. Guess not! Lol Loved it!

Why did Ash leave Pikachu behind instead of catching Raichu?

A Raichu and Pikachu can fall in love,I read somewhere that they can mate,since there from the same egg group...And there not techincally different species,since raichu is the evolved form o pikachu...

Who,this is the most creative critism I've ever given...Awesome fic!

So cute!This fic rules!Aw,Pika-chan likes Rai-kun!..

Pikachu and Rai-chu sitting by a lake,t.a.l.k.i.n.g,first comes love,then comes catching,then comes togetherness forever,and ever!

...Yay,more Pika-chan believers *ignores people in comments who said pikachu is a boy*

Utterly Speechless. :)

Yay for the humorous ending! Silly Ash doesn't know what he's talking about. Good job. Later!

It's quite sweet. I've always considered Pikachu a boy, but I guess we don't know, not really.

KAWAII! Hm, Very good! i also wrote a fic by this name, and it had the same theme too. giving up a a friend to someone else. But it was digimon. (davis stepping aside for Tk and Kari) NE way good fic 10/10

i was crying...*starts crying, agin...* ok... well just to tell you all the people in my school(that like pokemon) think ashes pika is a boy.*starts crying AGIN!*

PIKACHU IS A BOY! X_X THEY'RE NOT GAY! O

Yippee! You managed to write a happy story! I like this! It actually feels finished! Unlike a certain other story I know *AHEM* ::cough,One,cough:: Good story!

GREAT! You write good, long, stories

Great story

Very good Dragoness...

Ilike it when Raicgu couldn't manage "Pika"..

It makes u sit around like a greek philosopher wondering... is this good ending...

This is a great story. I read this somewhere else first-I don't know where-and I got an idea from it. It isn't anything like this. It came from, "If anything happens, you'll have to answer to me." It got me thinking about what would happen if something ever did happen to Pikachu. Just giving credit where credit is due. It looks like that'll be my first completely typed fic. I'll attempt to upload it soon-maybe even this weekend. Notice I said 'attempt'. _

twas' a cute fic in my opinion...*grins* I always liked the prospect of pikachu evolving into raichu...just in the electric ep...you know with lt. surge...*sighs* CUTE lt. surge...*grins* I kinda backed off from gary and sab...now its lt. and sabrina...and i'ttl stay thay way! but I REALLY REALLY *imitates ace ventura* REA...AAAAAALLLLLLLLLLYYYYY...don't think that pikachu could've beaten raichu...I mean agility doesn't even do a thing!