I read your story a long time ago, I just recently got an account and I wanted to make sure to add you to my favorites first thing. I really appreciate how your story actually flows like a novel. It never seemed like you had to force your characters into a relationship. In fact, I wish that the majority novelist (who get paid) would write like you do. Best wishes and too bad you retired

omg im loving it!

Interesting.. I've read mixed feelings about this story. Something about "too much descriptive language" and things like that. I think it's fine. The language is really rich.. something kind of reminds me of The Good Earth.. descriptive, yet almost simplistic.
I like how everything is spelled out, like a real novel. I think I see why many dislike it though. Many don't like to be disturbed with descriptive sentences or whatnot, and since this is fanfiction, it's not deep in morals which usually means less of such language.
I'll definitely read on though, not quite the best ItaSaku I've read, but it's pretty good in my eyes.

I love this stoy!

Wow, beautiful, I love this fic! Gr8 job!!

Okay,I started reading this one night and i found myself reading until it was 3 in the morning and i was exhausted. But i still didn't stop! I really like your work, sad to know you retired but if you think of coming back, please don't hesitate!

What an awesome story! Didn't really get the ending though. You did a great job staying true to the characters, sometimes infruiatingly so! Also I think its great how you brought them together medically wise. I just finished a ItaSaku fanfic and I'm kicking myself that I didn't think of it! But a great story over all!

How funny! I bet he was feeling something too in that room with her. Just a milder form, granted he's probably never been that close to a girl outside the battlefield.

Wow! I really like this so far! Its hard to read a ItaSaku unless its realistic, and you'd done a great job so far. On to chapter 2 now

I love this story - Sakura's ambivalence, her ability to make even someone like Itachi to care about another person and her strength of will. She might teeter on the edge, but she does it with her whole heart.

Not very smart of the Akatsuki member to leave Sakura with an Itachi-detector :P I guess he just wanted to mark his property.

This is certainly an interesting approach to Sasuke's time with Orochimaru, knowing what we know now about canon. Well, the snake sannin has not endeared himself to the boy so there's a realistic chance of him willingly staying in Konoha.

This is one of the best fics I've ever read. Itachi was dead on Itachi. Their whole relationship was so heart breaking. I cried more than once riding the emotional roller coaster. I've been reading this for hours straight and I can enthusiastically say I may just have to read Genshi right now. Who cares it's 530 in the morning. I don't think I'll be able to sleepuntil I find out how it all ends! You are an amazing writer and I hope to keep reading your work.

OMG! this story was like freaking awesome! alright coming back to normal. it was really, really good especially the part with "i never lie" and the time he slips the bracelet on her hand. it's just perfect.

please keep up the good work:D and maybe consider a sequel or something?:] well that's all bye...


lot's of greetings ByakuganLove

This story was amazing, absolutely amazing.
I admire your work and only hope i can be as good as you xD
Thankiez for writing such a wonderful story <3