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| Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-07-12 ch 1,  | abuseA great story. I liked the part where Gil was looking at his butterfly. |
| Number1GSRCSIfan 2007-09-28 ch 1, | abuseAw. Thats is soo cute BTW whos the mommy |
| Rainbow Stevie 2006-09-26 ch 1, | abuseAww...my first thought when I saw the summary was "Sara?", but this is much better. Very clever idea, love the extended metaphor(s). Especially "he would never tire of observing it." |
| csismylover 2005-07-28 ch 1, | abuseAw, I'm not even a Sofia/Griss shipper but aw... I totally bought the butterfly thing. :) |
| Denese925 2005-06-11 ch 1, | abuseI love this , its so sweet |
| Sara Duquesne 2005-06-10 ch 1, | abuseReally nice! I hope the Butterfly's mom is Sara! |
| The Phantom26 2005-06-10 ch 1, | abuseaw...this was so cute! i loved it! great job! ^__^ |
| Ambient Flames 2005-06-09 ch 1, | abuseI'm a fan of GSR, and I will not flame you. I like how the story was ambiguous, so even though you won't write GSR, I could easily image the story being out Grissom and Sara. Most GSR shippers are respectful, though there are those few times. My biggest piece of advice, is don't try and pawn off a story of Grissom/Sophia or Greg/Sara as being 'The New GSR'... it really ** off GSR shippers because we had the term first and its still relative to our couple. Avoid that, and you'll be fine. But yeah, I really did like this, short and sweet. We have been having these long debates lately about quantity versus quality, and this story definitely proves that it's quality that rules. Keep up the good work, and I will come bug you more later, lol! |