 flood125 2009-08-24 . chapter 3love your storys got to contiune this story |
 Kurt Baros aka The Falcon 2009-08-20 . chapter 3dude this a very funny story and i love what you did kasumi... i could see her doing that...f the people that bitched about the power puff girls being in the story i loved the show when it first came out. also torment akane more she's a B...I...T...C...H, she deserves everthing that she gets and i hope ranma gets someone that cares about him instead of tryin to kill him all the time with her living toxic waste maskerating as food or her hitting him with her mallet. also dude you should reread it. I saw a few mispelled words but other then that i thought you did good. keep up the good work and write on. |
 rewind gone nuts 2009-05-23 . chapter 3An interesting story indeed, fairly well-written in the traditional "comedic" angle of Ranma 1/2. A bit cliche in some areas, but not bad. You said that there was one chapter left to this story; are you ever going to finish it? |
 cabrera1234 2009-04-26 . chapter 3hi i was wondering when the next update you promise? |
 Kuriboh LV9 2009-04-19 . chapter 3i like it.
keep on writing |
 Skye Silverwing 2009-02-14 . chapter 3That... was entertaining. Older Powerpuffs are fun, and them having a crush on Ranma was great.
One thing, though. Nabiki knew who Buttercup was in the first chapter and not in the second.
I hope to see more of it. I suggest working Shampoo Moouse and Cologne in, though, and bringing some Powerpuff villains around. |
 elrail 2008-10-02 . chapter 3dang kas-chan is scary |
 Olaf74 2008-08-14 . chapter 1I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible. |
 Cardinel 2007-03-08 . chapter 3This is a very unique story, one which surprised me, because i did not expect to like it like I did. but I did like it. and would now like to see it continued. possibly even have sequals. you wrote this one fairly well for what I've seen. A sequal could have Ranma accidently getting malleted into a vat of chemical X, and leaving nerima to head for townsville, since your grown up versions of the PPG are much better for me then the kids they used to be, and Ranma would need the support of the only other chemical X enhanced people in the world, other then the rowdy ruff boys, who, while very cool, were still evil, and besides, I think their dead. Proffesser Utonium is goona have a fit when one of Bubbles' targets comes to visit. All in all, this was a story I came into very skeptical about, but have come to enjoy and found very entertaining. |
 brindani 2007-02-15 . chapter 3I've actually read this story twice it is so good. It has a lot of potential especially at the spot that you've left it. Blossom has finally discovered boys. Oh, the evil and intricate plot twists that can develop from this. I'm avidly looking forward to seeing how you masterfully weave all this into its final intricate pattern.
brindani |
 Tamphis 2006-10-22 . chapter 3Here's an idea, just for fun, have the Girls take Ranma back to Townsville to train them and have the Professor "acidentally" leave some Chemical X out. Just a random though.
Now, seriously, I think that this should be a Ranma/Buttercup pairing, just because I think it's a good idea and I hate all of Ranma's Fiancees. Especially Akane. I don't know if you had pairings in mind or what, but it's food for thought. Other than that, the story is good so far, it needs a little polishing in continuity and "Jumping" but not much. Keep up the good work and update soon.
Ja ne. |
 dogbertcarroll 2006-10-19 . chapter 3For some reason I can see the criminals of Townsville
being so unnerved by the girls disappearance that they
end up protecting the town. Wouldn't want any outsiders
making inroads in the criminal trade while the girls
are gone after all.
If Ranma does manage to replicate the PPG's abilities
Kasumi will force him to teach her! |
 ranma girl 14 2006-10-18 . chapter 3shoulda seen that last part coming, plz plz update soon ^_^ |
 Joe Fenton 2006-10-18 . chapter 3Not bad. It will be interesting to see where Taro got his new abilities. I like Kasumi's obsession.
One minor note - Blossom never had worse eyesight than Bubbles. Bubbles needed glasses at one point until Buttercup accidentally gave her laser eye surgery.
Blossom's weak point has always been her hair. Mess with her hair and you're in BIG trouble. Cutting Blossom's hair like Ryoga did Akane's and you would be in HUGE trouble. |
 Dragon Man 180 2006-10-18 . chapter 3I hope the PPG lay into Akane for bashing Ranma when he did nothing wrong. Stupi hormone driven Bubbles! Nice fight with Taro, will we ever find out how he got the ability to manipulate water? |