That was funny! God Eriko, I never thought she was that playful!

Aww, Youko. ;_;

The previous chapters, I've also enjoyed. Love your writing. *_*

I am rather sorry I've only found this story recently, particularly as it is quite brilliant. 'Anonymous' is especially so. My regards to the writer.

ethne

this one is so in character!!love it! I really wish it was part of the anime/manga...youkoxsei...

are there other stories like this? where can i find them? i like your stories so much, wish i could write like you ^_^

Haha, I can never remember whether or not I've reviewed a chapter... I believe I had been reviewing on the yuriville site, but it won't let me on, I don't know if that's because it's shut down or not, but... regardless... I really enjoyed this one. The ending was just... perfect. As usual, hehe =)

hahaha~that's actually quite believable~yah...i love the end though...it's almost as if i can see an episode of this playing out. nice. well, g'luck w/ writing 30~

And it ends on a bitter note. Oh well. Since there's no 'complete' button, I'm holding out for an update. Hopefully a humourous one, because while that was masterful, it was also extremely, eh, melancholy feeling. Still, write whatever you want. I'm just here to ramble on.

Speak of the devil, eh? That went and made me feel sad again. Oh well. I learned a new word. Never heard of coruscation before.

Oh, I can just see that happening. You have an amazing range as an author. You can either depress me or make me howl with laughter.

Wow. Besides being extremely hot, that was one of the funniest things I've read in a while. Poor, poor Sei. Or lucky, depending on how you look at it. Mainly, I feel sorry for the traumatized people in Rei and Sachiko's apartment. Imagining Youko acting like that... She's never going to hear the end of it. The final touch was the coconut song. I know it exists, but for Youko to be singing it, and under those circumstances, was too hilarious.

Ah, I knew I knew your name! You're the author of Melt. Well, no wonder these are all so good. I love Eriko's idea of a push. I have absolutely no idea what 'deko-chin' means, though. Enlighten me, if you will.

.retirw retteb a eb ot tnaw em ekam uoy .yralubacov ym desaercni ev'uoy evileb od i dna elbarimda si elyts gnitirw ruoy .gnirraj dna lufituaeb ylpmis

-Da Vinci

I've read this at LJ and i can't help reading it again. ^_^ they were brilliant! I love every one of them! Write more! All hail this couple!

I can understand Youko's reaction, who would want to kiss someone after kissing a cat *bleh*