HEY, im on chapter 12 too... dont let 17 hurt chichi, or do something bad to her. she is mated! i agree with the comment below me... if ever your going to update this.. im still not quite sure if i should put this on my favorite. but it was great. just the part of 18 at the beginning, makes me hurl. when she flirts. and the part her being mad to chichi.. what a bitch.. and dont ever hurt chichi's character here. i dont want 17 filthy hands over chichi... kakarot is the only guy whose allowed.

chapter 12... dark deciever

dont let anything bad happened to chichi when you update okay! dont let 17, or that person who come in her apartment hurt or touch her! i hope kakarot got there in time..

DAMN! 18 PISSED ME OFF HERE... I HATE HER IN THIS FAN FIC... is she jealous? i want to kick her

LOL! i was a bit worried there.. but didnt mind, since goku and chichi moment had caught me..


i dont want to see vegeta mortified, lol so u got me there, i like the pairing goku and chichi, vegeta and bulma, kriln and 18
so when i read it, i was curious what he had seen, but lol vegeta... AND HEY VEGETA IS HOT TOO YOU KNOW, LOL.. DONT LEAVE HIM BEHIND. I DONT like 18 here, i really hate her in this fan fic, and felt bad for krillin!

Vegeta groaned, as he looked at the scene.

Bulma was moaning and vomiting in a bucket, while Yamcha grunted at the display and looked away in disgust. ( A/N:LMAO, I did that on purpose because I knew that was what you would think hehe, (dodges stones) sorry but this is a comedy lol)

wow, i am so move with goku and chichi... they are just heavenly couple.. dreamy lemon, hahaha for chichi and goku forever!... sighed... i dont like 18 here either...

wow thats great.. but i dont like 18 here... and why does she treat krillin like that? 18 isnt a flirt, but here.. i dont like her attitude here.

im getting annoyed, always reading goku the hottest.. i mean, yeah he is. but always being chase by all girls? oh come on... every fan fic i almost read, consist of it. i hope someone do something about it.. im getting sick and tired hearing it.. just like edward cullen... the book is always describing how admirable his body is... please stop that.. goku sure is hot. but i only like goku and chichi.

hmp... good things its not (puke) i cant even right the pairing... im just happy its goku/kakarot- chichi pairing.. hahaha... lol... im to the next chappy now... btw, u got me worried for a minute, i was about to change story, but i was still curious... lol... sighed.. GOOD THINGS ITS GOKU AND CHICHI... hahaha

Its a good story. Defiantly worth continuing!! =D Hope to see it updated soon and look forward to reading your other stories! Cheers =D

Love the story,LOVE dbz and LOVE! sex and the city! keep it up its going great. Hope u update soon :D

has me intersted and i don't even watch sex in the city

omgersh! i cant wait to see what happens!!

Love the story! Hurry up and review, I wanna know what happens next! I never thought i would like this story cause I'm not even a fan of sex in the city but if this version was aired i would most defo watch it! Keep up the good work!

Figure in black

Will you freakin' update!

Update son!