 Redrum 9/2/02 . chapter 1Only Tai could think of something like that... lol :) Nice story. |
 Wicked Wiccan 7/25/01 . chapter 1wow, that was great! Thanks for your imput to on the messageboard, that was what i was looking for. This was realy great, you should do more! |
 Betsy 7/15/01 . chapter 1LOL! Nice ficcie, Musouka-san! |
 Blubglub 6/30/01 . chapter 1Where to start? The fic was wellw ritten and the characterization was on the button. The writing of naughty words fits the basic 11-year old persona (Oh to be young again) and the plot flows smoothly and shows that thought had been out into it. It seemed to be more of a friendship fic than Taito, but considering the ages of the characters involved, that was appropriate. Overall an excellent fic that shows that you put much thought and effort into it. Bravo. |
 Taiorabum 6/28/01 . chapter 1 I have decided you're really quite creepy.
I have decided I don't like your work.
I have decided as a person, you're nasty and rude.
It's nice being the one making the decisions, isn't it?
Taiora-4-Ever.
Live with it, sweetheart. |
 Jessie4 4/17/01 . chapter 1This is quite a welcome change from all the Taito fluff out there... It's also funny as anything! you've done a -great- job on the characterization, and everything seems to have worked out just perfectly! Kudos for a good job. |
 starsnake 4/5/01 . chapter 1 ::glomps Musouka:: That was sooo cute! I've said this before and I'll say it again, there is a shortage of *good* Taito fics in this world...fortunately, that shortage has just been lessesned slightly. How do you people write such convincing 11-year-olds? I can't do it to save my life...ah well, very well-written and, even though it's a Taito, I approve. |
 Nanaki Lioness 4/5/01 . chapter 1LOL! Very fluffy and sweet *grins* I like it! |
 Ashna 4/4/01 . chapter 1 ew. That was not a Taito that was little boys doing something gross.Yeesh don't get peoples hopes up. |
 Tani Barton 4/2/01 . chapter 1That was sweet. And yeah, they are eleven in the first season, so it's really appropriate. That's why I always up their age. I mean honestly, I have a nephew who's ten and he's a pain in the @ss, along with all his little friends. Great story, I laughed, I don't know what else to say so I'm babbling. _ |
 Princess Of Quake 4/2/01 . chapter 1No, don't stop, this was good! |
 Rachel Lynn too lazy to sign in 4/2/01 . chapter 1 Eieee! Musouka-san! *dies laughing* Oh that was great! I can soooo see those two "writing" swear words. *giggles* And I can *definitely* see Tai getting caught like that trying to put out the fire! *bounces around happily* Too funny! - |
 Subaru 4/2/01 . chapter 1CUUUUUUTTTE! I loved this, Mu-chan! Oh my gosh! it is SO like eleven year old boys, but then you've got the real thing to base it on, huh? anyway... I loved it! cutecutecutecute *breaks broken record machine* I won't say write more, but another of the same kind would do nicely. anyway, I"m off to upload my newest concotion. bye! |