This is a really cool story... I was a little confused at first but it was really good.

NO! VERG DIED! MY FAVORITE CHARACTER! anyways this story was short but good. it was really short in the beginning but it got longer and longer. great strory

... You are so evil! You killed them? That's... evil!

This chapter was good, though. Sad, and evil, but good. I'd like to see more of your stories in the future. (Hopefully with happier endings!) As for the sequel... well, let me just say it'd better have a happier ending!

Nice job, even though it was... short. Very short. Keep writing, ya?

Til next time!

Jassy

Yay! Updates! Finally! It was a good chapter. More Kino/Hayami hints! (You're making me a very happy reader!)

What can I say about this chapter? Not much. You improve each time. This is much better than when you started. (Talk about fast improvement)I just have one question: If Kino was in the infirmary because her legs were broken and there was a chance she could never walk again, how'd she get into the sub?

That really confused me...

Anyway, good job! Update soon!

Ooh... YAY! This was a very good chapter! I love the way Kino and Hayami act towards each other. They're relationship is kind of weird... it's like they're borderlining between a brother-sister type thing, and a romantic involvement... AWESOME!

Seriously, this chapter was much better. More detail, more emotions, more character interaction. It was great. You have a very promising fic here. Keep it up. The only thing I didn't like was the fact that poor Kino got hurt.

Update soon. Bye!

Once again, too short _ But this was good. I honestly would have liked to see more interaction between Hayami and Kino, and Hayami and Verg. And more detail in the chapter... try to flush it out a bit, tell us more about the setting and characters.

But it was still good. Nice and interesting. Update soon!

Not bad so far. Pretty good. Too short though _ Could'a used a bit more detail, too. But it was still good. It's nice to see that someone else is writing in thi section. I hope this'll be a Kino/Hayami

Update soon, okay?

Oh, and if you like the Kino/Hayami pairing, then you might my like my story, "Return to Life". Check it out if you want

Good work, and keep it up.

Bye!