Very good.

Excellent. Well done story. I liked it!

wow this is so well written! I love how Sirius thinks that it is James flying and then works out that it is Harry.

Excellent treatment of Sirius. Well written.

*grinsa all giddy like* COOL! ^^

Wow, you're a really good writer with a fantastic imagination. I never even thought about this! Great job, can't wait to read more of your stuff.

Overall, this was very well done. I liked the memories that aren't really memories -- or are they? Sirius confusing James and Harry; watching Remus from afar, or remembering watching him ... it very effectively conveyed his not-so-stable mental state. The only thing that didn't work for me was the last paragraph. You had us so intensely in Sirius's point of view that it was jarring to be taken out of that at the end.

I think I like this story...