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| Amy 2007-08-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was the best Jack Sawyer fic i have read on here. Well Done!! You got the characters perfect. Please write another chapter i loved it, and i really wana know if sawyer tells jack about his father. Great Story please continue :) |
| pokerchip 2006-03-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood story - like your version of what's in Sawyer's head! |
| fiona 2006-02-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseyou have a good concept of what to write, you just really need to learn how to write, like correct grammar. its not MUST OF, its MUST HAVE. its not Locke and Sayid made it there job , its Locke and Sayid made it THEIR job . but I liked the story. |
| Xtin2000 2005-08-22 ch 1,  | abuseYes, that was really great! You got those two completely in character. This last scene sounds like something exactly from the series itself, nicely nicely done! If you could just let the whole story run through spell-check somewhere it would make it a better effect, though sometimes great contents overshadows sloppy spelling ;) |
| Diane 2005-08-18 ch 1, anon. | abusePlease tell me there is going to be another part to this story. It is a terrific story but ya can't just let us hang this way. Pretty please, add another chapter. |
| Aramirandme 2005-07-03 ch 1, | abuseTher is a second part to this right? Right?! D** There has Better be a second part!! On a more freindly, and slightly less paniced, note: Love the story. =:D |
| Animagus-Spirit 2005-06-10 ch 1, | abuseThree words. Best...Fic...Ever. |