A great story. Very good.

very, very nice.

This story is awesome. I love angst.

Very good story! The sheer angst...I could definitely see Vader almost looking down the abyss of insanity with what you wrote.

Very creepy how he is so infatuated with the power, he just tries to justify everything he's done for it.

Again, great story and I also thank you for leaving feedback on mine as well.

Very well written. I love the detail and the angst. Your success in stringing Vader and Anakin together is outstanding.

this is so sad, but really good. Poor Ani

Wow! very powerful.

o deep