Interesting battle scenes. I hate Zhao as much as anyone else and love to see Zuko beat the old fart. Though that one line, “Everyone has to face pain and humiliation at some point in their life, Zhao. But they must learn to face it, rather than run from it. Only then, will they be able to bear it. And the only way to do that is let suffering be your teacher,” was quite chilling. I wonder where you're going with this.

Poor Sokka. Eight whole hours without food! Hmm, Zuko saving Katara? I must read on...

hurry up with chapter 22 on hearts of fire !

Hey so I just read this whole story through in one sitting and wanted you to know I thought it was really well written and the characters are awesome. The plot is gripping as well. I always love that, unlike most stories, it didn't move too quickly. The time was PERFECT.

The only thing that bothered me, was how bothered YOU were throughout the whole story. Your author's notes took away from the end of each chapter.

You always talked of how irritated you were with all of your reviews, but guess what. That's what people do. They are stupid and bored and they have nothing better to do than tear your story down, but it's an excellent story and well written and you shouldn't care. So why complain about it? It only provokes people.

The only only point in THIS reviews is to express that your story would be MUCH better without your negative author notes to distract readers from your story. Though with what I can gather from what you've said in this story, this review will simply 'irritate' you. If nothing else, I've given you something to else to complain about. Enjoy.

Hi!

I love your story and am kind of stunned that you say you dont like your own story any more but I guess thats O.K. I do that too. I am a total Zuko & Katara fan so I like that you put them together in your fanfiction and I hope you can get the next chapter posted real soon and I am Sure It'll come out verry nicely.

Chow! SodaPop13

!ZUKO & KATARA FOREVER!

I don't know what you are talking about - this story is AMAZING! I'm still crying! Seriously, if you are getting 800 reviews from only 21 chapters, isn't that proof enough that you are doing amazingly well? One of my stories is 10 chapters, and I only have 8 reviews. Even if I were to add another 11 chapters, I doubt I would ever be able to get that many reviews or write that well.

You have a really amazing gift for writing. Now it all depends on how you use it.

Great story

I absolutely love this story.
It's just so exiting, epic, and well written!

Even though I am kind of a Kataang person... *laughs nervously* DONT HURT ME!
This story actually convinced me to give Zutara a chance.

If you finish this, I'll be happy forever! =D

Wow.

This story is totally amazing and epic! :3 You really think it's awful? :( Aww, but it's great! I'm totally favoriting it. XD

Nice job, and I'm looking forward to an update, whenever that may be. :)

~ky

I love your story very much...

please update...I'm begging...:)
Thank u!

Chelseakat

Good chapter. I liked it.

-zukoluver45

This is a kewl fanfic. I got this from the auther of Beware. I foregot her name. I also saw your name is Jessica. That is my name.

-zukoluver45

Haha... it has been like three years hah? And this story ISN'T shitty. I can't believe it's not over after three years but it's NOT shitty. And guess what? YOU BROKE 810 REVIEWS!

Well, I'm looking forward to chapter twenty two, just PLEASE don't end the story as a cliff hanger, that's just pure evil right there. Um... so yeah. This is the BEST story I've ever read on this site and you are by FAR the GREATEST writer I've ran into.

Update soon!

Oh dang... sorry about those spam messages.

But the chapter! You like making your readers cry don't you? Well, yeah me too. But still! When Natsu died I pictured Nobutada from the Last Samurai dieing... it was really sad. The last chapter from this story I remember reading is the Symbol that was Always There (i think thats what it was called) threse chapters are new so that's cool! but it's so sad and so crazy intense...

I swear, if you say your story sucks ONE MORE TIME!