Reviews for Final Flight of the Phoenix

Reviews For: Final Flight of the Phoenix

Descena 2007-06-24 ch 6,	abuseWell, just excellent. The irony in the story is just amazing. The title of the chapter, whether we realize it or not, is how it all ends. The mix within it is very good. Then angst and the suspense. I only wish that it could've been played out. The fans of the story how been cheated with the overpassing of it. But we all know what happens when we simply can no longer go on. I'm glad I know how it ended though. Even though it's better when the others write how it is, I still love what the story is about and how Jean learns that she was the problem the whole time. She could never control herself or her powers and that was what led to so many people she cared about dying. Truly wonderful writing. If you had that idea stuck in your head the whole time when you began this, then congrats, because I plot that strong and deatailed is very hard to come by and write into words. Whether this was complete or not, it is one of my fav's of the X-Men fics, and it will continue to be. I've read your other work, but this one still tops it. I would look forward to seeing more of your XMen work with Jean Grey as a main character whether she's with Scott, Logan, someone else, or no one else. You certainly have the talent, and don't let anyone else tell you otherwise. It's just in how you use it. Since you have it, use it, take advantage of it, and shove the stories down people's throats. So please, if you continue any other further work, PM me and let me know. It's been a pleasure, and as always, take care. If you ever happen to cross my X-Men stories, stop and review, let me know what you think. It'll be great! :) Take care and good luck in future success
Descena 2007-06-17 ch 5,	abuseI dont know why no one has ever reviewed this story. Its ** awesome! I've never read a story like this before with such a strong backround and plot. It's amazing! You need to go over this again and update! PLEASE!
Redd Eyez 2005-08-26 ch 4,	abusenice chapter. great job with the fight scenes, now i could never write that good. once again, UPDATE! JOTT 4EVER
Redd Eyez 2005-08-23 ch 3,	abusei love this story! it's really cool in my opinion. i hate sad ending so i hope this one is better. i luv stories that mention the phoenix. i can't wait to see what scott has planned for their dr session. i can't wait for the shuttle crash either, i want to see how it happens. JOTT 4EVER
Redd Eyez 2005-08-10 ch 2,	abusefinaly! i've waited so long for this chapter but it was worth it. this chapter is perfect but it's alittle short, please make the next one longer. if i was jean i wouldn't be able to control myself. please updte sooner than this time. JOTT 4EVER

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