Nice work! Thats what I felt Hitomi should be thinking at the ending. But I can't help but point out that throughout the story you started repeating similar things so it became a little boring. Well done anyways!

Sweet. Sad. Very Hitomi. I like this one.

Hm, checking your author's part is convenient. I got myself an Esca fic. ^^; This one is nice contemplation on Hitomi's part. It's realistic and very possible.

good! good good good! ^_^ _really_good! so true too... poor Hitomi... I've always wondered what she would think after she goes back to Earth... ;_; poor Hitomi-chan! ^-^

I really enjoyed reading this... it resonates with a situation all too familiar for anyone who's ever doubted their feelings. It wasn't prose-ish, but it was done with style :)

waff?

hey, ate ice... ok. forget the 'ate' thing. well, its the 1st esca fic ive read since im not a fanatic. but being a follower of my mentor... well, i did like the ending. actually, my fave character is Folken. Well, i had forgotten his name demo... astig nya sobra! ok yon,cge.

It's a really wonderful story... I'm flattered to have it dedicated to me ;) thankie so much :) (Of course I'm biased towards this, but then you'd know that ;) They say longing is more purifying than loving anyway :) I wonder if you're going to make hitomi a come back to VOE land again thing... or vice versa ;) I like introspection here by the way... getting into her head like that was really nice... few people could actually do that without changing too much and leaving some of the real character a little different. Okay... I should go now and it's okay if it's waffy... :) I can pretend it's me and **** and you can pretend it's ... It's a good break from angsty... cute thing about the asterisk ;)

*sigh* This was truly a bitter sweet story. It's soo sad that Hitomi feels like this but i bet she probably did feel like this or at least the first couple days. Someday Van and Hitomi will be together VAN AND HITOMI FOREVER ! *giggles* Great fic !

Very pretty... I liked it. Keep writing! OOOOOOO, XXXXXXXXx and COokies ~Pixie^A^