 Voice of the Forest 2/20/10 . chapter 14I feel sorry for Ken. He doesn't deserve such an agonizing retribution. But good story. |
 NostalgiaS 9/2/09 . chapter 7D'aww.. happy ending. |
 NostalgiaS 1/17/08 . chapter 14'Convulsions.' . Uuau.. @@! |
 gaaraslover92 3/11/06 . chapter 1HOW DARE YOU DO THAT TO POOR KEN! The Kaiser is my favorite character, and even he's not that insane! And Ken, no one deserves that kind of pain, he would never go back to the darkness after he realized that he was causing real pain! |
 Lady of Life and Death 2/12/06 . chapter 14OMG! I love how this ended! This story is so awsome! |
 coffeexcoffeexcoffee 8/17/05 . chapter 4Good Story but WHY ARE U MAKING ME SOB! Why r u torturing me!
(Angrily but crying)& Elyon? 9 out of 10 (voice breaking)Good Job! RainXKen
-Rain Ichijouji |
 coffeexcoffeexcoffee 8/17/05 . chapter 7YOU ASSHOLE! HOW DARE U THIS STORY IS BULLSHIT!
DUMBASS! 1 out of 10!
-Rain Ichijouji |
 Yersi Fanel 7/1/05 . chapter 14That was Amazing |
 Scarabbug 4/6/05 . chapter 14Just found this. Incredible and very touching. Very in character as well. Nice one. |
 luvwell 2/18/05 . chapter 14yay! that was great! i almost cried! are you thinking of making a secwul?(sp?) |
 Vampire-child-of-the-ligh 1/4/05 . chapter 14I love your story please write a sequill |
 Diva'sDream 9/24/04 . chapter 14Dude, that has got to be the single BEST thing I've EVER read! |
 Ken's luver 5/2/04 . chapter 14Oh absolutely beautiful and so worth the wait. I don't know what to say about it other than it was a perfect way to end an awsome story that I thouroughly enjoyed. All the loose ends and final thoughts were all brought together and held in a nice package that wasn't overly perfect in the sense of being fake, but real. I loved it. It touched me. The part where Ken spoke of 'love' made me think quite a bit, since I recently wrote a chapter to a story my friend and I are working on (Cruel Angel's Thesis) where love came up as a topic. I've been watching 'Lain' lately and that's what inspired it. Anyway the point is, you brought it all together, love is ultimately what makes us survive and not just survive, but live. I think that's why I loved this last chapter so much. It's beautiful and inspiring...and your style of writing is still as wonderful as I remember it to be. Keep it up and I hope to see more from you! Fanfiction.Net is very scarce on good authors like you.
Nic |
 klyukaizer 4/19/04 . chapter 13 Somehow I can't continue my review in Chapter 14...so I'll continue here:
"I love every one of you" Ah...indeed, for me, those words were the best words Ken had said in this ficcie...good job!
Love the ending...it's unique and different from other action/adventure fics! _ I look forward in reading more and more of your fanfics... Tah! Tah! |
 klyukaizer 4/19/04 . chapter 14 Damn it, Ken! Snap out of yourself! "I love everyone of you..." |