so, are you ever going to finish this story? because I would really like to know the ending...

continue, please no cliffhanger, please continue

...You're seriously gonna leave it like that? Please update!

Oh My Gosh!! You can't end it there! I need to know which side he chose!! lol

This is an excellent AU story, I like the idea that Padme and Anakin are raising their children together already, I think it fits in with the idea of the original trilogy even better than having the twins born at the end of the movie. And with English as a second language, I think your writing is wonderful!! The only mistakes I find are ones similar to what an English-speaking writer would make, which just shows how talented you are with the English language. I do hope that you decide to continue this story, it's just getting to the good part!

Nice job! :-D

Good story! I truly hope you update soon!

please continue this story

no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no! Please update! It's so cruel doing that to your fans! I see you're still writing...Is there any chance you're interested in this enough to finish it?

FINISH! PLEASE

oh come on, don't stop there, i want to know what happens. do more

Wait, I made a mistake.

3 YEARS. TROIS. TREZE. TREI.

Sorry if I sound crazy, it's just I'm so in love with that pairing. ;_;

My actual constructive criticism is that Zak was too obvious of a plot device. It was obvious from the moment you met him that he would try to break them up, maybe next time use someone more subtle?

Yes, you get two reviews. Aren't you so cool. :P

You.

Yes, you.

I'm 14 and I'm ridiculously obsessed with Star Wars and Hayden Christensen. They both make me happy. In fact, I love Anakin/Padme almost as much as Leia/Han Solo (what can I say, Harrison Ford was a babe? ;P).

Yes, this all has complete relevance to my review.

So, after rewatching my favorite movies, I was feeling awfully sad that Padme and Anakin weren't together in the end. That's when I was reading your Naruto fanfiction 'Fangirling' (which is FANTASTIC, btw) and checked out your profile. To my amazement, I saw this and I let out an undignified fangirl-ish squeal of delight.

So I read it, I'm all happy and then I notice you HAVEN'T UPDATED FOR 2 YEARS.

This is most distressing to me, so I implore you, PLEASE UPDATE.

Do it for the little 14-year old girl who believes in you! PLEASE!

This is Eggsactly, Star Wars fangirl, signing out, yo.

P.S. Do you agree with me that Darth Maul totally needed more lines? :/

Awesome story so far please please finish it.

Ah!
To be continued...When?!
When exactly are you planning on continuing this?!
You gotta do it now! Right away! Immediately!
You must finish this fic!
Please!
P l e a s e !
P L E A S E ! ! !

I loved it! Update very soon! I actaully wrote a story like this.

I love it. Keep writing