A truly heart wrenching story. A wonderful read. Contains many eliments, Action, adventure, Drama to the 10th degree, heart warming and chocked full of angst.

There was only one thing that stung me. POT, from my own very long term experience, is NOT physically addictive no matter how many quacks say it is.

It also does not lead to heavier drug use in general. After decades of smoking pot every day I managed to stop over night with NO side effects to quitting unlike tobacco which is very, very addictive and I have never been able to quit that.

Shame on the tobacco co.'s for ever inventing that dirty drug.

But that was the only thing I disagree with in this story that Jeff could be addicted after one joint. IMPOSSIBLE! But it must have been some really wacky pot to get them as high as they did. -lol-

Great story, I really enjoyed reading this.

Steve

Wow Dayna that was some great story. As you know I'm not a Voyagers fan, but I really enjoyed it especially now that I understand what the red/green lights mean. I did note the odd typo or two, and I noticed that the exclamation mark bunny was threatening to escape from his cage on occasion. Usually when I read a story I don't notice things like that, but I am now...m I wonder why. Must be the influence of my fabulous Beta reader. I was happy to see the end of Jimmy, he was some nasty piece of work. I loved the dogs Bo and Katie you had them spot on, exactly as I would imagine two ranch dogs would behave. I really enjoyed the banter you had going between Jon and Vivian at VHQ especially with the Stars Wars references, and that Jon, he sounds like one handsome man! I think I could really fall for him.
Once again, I thoroughly enjoyed it and I'm looking forward to reading the next one. Well done.

WAAH!! I'm at the end of the story!! SEQUEL SEQUEL...Oh, wait, dah...there are 2 more stories after this one...lol!

Now that is a way to end a story - HAPPY ENDINGS! BRAVA - AWESOME Story Dayna! :)

So odd that when the guys want to leave, they can't! What's up with that!

Spot on with the description of the 'crossroad' - very true - we all have these types of decisions to make in our lives, and hopefully choose the correct one to follow!

OMG - Matt swept away in the river :O Now who are these people at Headquarters?! LOL ;)

This chapter is the reason WHY I LOVE this story! You can tell just how well you have these characters down. My heart is breaking over all the emotions that are coming out in this chapter! You have the whole H/C down to a science!! BRAVA :)

OK...do you see it...see the heart RIPPED from my chest here! OMFG! Can you please send me some tissues here because I'm a mess! LOVE IT! :)

Why are 'our' boys so stubborn!? GAH! I just wanna shake some sense into them.

WOW - Simon certainly has a lot to say now doesn't he! OUCH - those words can really sting! At least maybe with Simon fighting with Jeff, it might knock his attitude a peg or two down! So surprised that no one told (or that Jeff didn't ask) about how he was found in the barn!

Oh tormented Jeffy! Bogg was so there looking for you! Can I dope slap him, please...ROFLOL!

This one really pulled at my heart strings. Nice chapter!

So nice to see that Simon has a good support system that he can turn to when he's upset now! I bet that he is worried about what could happen to him! I'm sure that this was a HUGE WAKE UP CALL for him!

I feel for Bogg in this chapter - not knowing all of what happened that afternoon - feeling like it was all his fault! Good work there Ms. Daynawayna! :)

Now, I've read both versions of this chapter, and I do enjoy this revised chapter much more. You are so correct that Tracy should have seem them before 'going home'. Nice choice in changing the story on that!

So Jimmy got what he deserved, huh! What a way to go!

PERFECT...GREAT...now I'm boo hoo'ing like a little girl...roflol...my Jeffy! :(

I so can't take much more of this angst, Ms. Daynawayna!OMG - I still can't get over that Bogg was holding the rope that... O*M*G! Ok, I so need to pull myself together now to move onward!! SUPERB CHAPTER!! :)

Ok, so now my heart is in my throat - Thanks alot...LOL! Extremely angsty chapter here! Lots going on! Can't believe that this Jimmy is so evil that he would do THAT to someone! He's just a creep!

Oh my, Bogg is so not going to be happy when he finds out what Jimmy did to them! No sir, I tell ya!

Oh my - how could Jeff says those things to Bogg!? I mean was Jeff really not thinking that Bogg could have died too in that crash! (sigh::sadness). Jeff so needs to understand that good or bad they have a job to do - and DEAL WITH IT!

Daynawayna...WHAT have you done?! O*M*G! Rip my heaart out and hand it to me on a platter why don't ya! I am so in tears right now - HOW could you do THAT of all things!!ROFLOL! SO ANGSTY - LOVIN' IT! GREAT JOB!

That was a really touching scene between Simon & Kirk. You could almost feel the pain that Simon was having with his mom leaving!

Boy, Jeff is really having major growing pains in this story. Very off character & angsty - I like it!! I don't know what it is I like about see poor Jeffy so distraught! LOL

Now who is the mysterious omnious voice - could that be DRAKE? Could he be the head of The Crew?

Can't wait to find out!

Dogs are amazing creatures, aren't they? You can train them to detect almost everything!

I don't like this Jimmy kid, he sure is trouble with a capital "T". Even more so now that he's been caught! I hope that Jeff and Simon watch out for him!

I think that Jeffy needs more than a stern talking to about this!