I am impressed by how much fuller and deeper this story is than the first Tracy story. I am looking forward to reading the next one.

I tend to think that, Jeffrey being awake when Bogg visited him, he'd've opened up then instead of pretending to be asleep. Just my opinion.

I'm reading the story now, and I really don't see where it's indicated that pot is physically addictive?

I love this story, except for this one exchange. I hate that Tracy had to threaten Bogg to not omni out instead of finding Jeff. Yes, Bogg was there, but I would have preferred if it didn't seem like he was forced. I can't see him *ever* really leaving Jeffrey. I almost would have preferred him omni-ing out and then coming back on his own.

But, a little thing in an overall great story, even if I agree with those who say pot isn't all that addictive. I don't have personal experience (I'm allergic, so like Bo, I sneeze, or more accurately, cough up a lung), but pot does seem to be a fairly non-addictive thing. Worked for the story, though, and psychologically *anything* can be addicting (even Voyagers!) LOL.

I feel a little lost with the Bouds- was there something between times keeper and this?

A truly heart wrenching story. A wonderful read. Contains many eliments, Action, adventure, Drama to the 10th degree, heart warming and chocked full of angst.

There was only one thing that stung me. POT, from my own very long term experience, is NOT physically addictive no matter how many quacks say it is.

It also does not lead to heavier drug use in general. After decades of smoking pot every day I managed to stop over night with NO side effects to quitting unlike tobacco which is very, very addictive and I have never been able to quit that.

Shame on the tobacco co.'s for ever inventing that dirty drug.

But that was the only thing I disagree with in this story that Jeff could be addicted after one joint. IMPOSSIBLE! But it must have been some really wacky pot to get them as high as they did. -lol-

Great story, I really enjoyed reading this.

Steve

Wow Dayna that was some great story. As you know I'm not a Voyagers fan, but I really enjoyed it especially now that I understand what the red/green lights mean. I did note the odd typo or two, and I noticed that the exclamation mark bunny was threatening to escape from his cage on occasion. Usually when I read a story I don't notice things like that, but I am now...m I wonder why. Must be the influence of my fabulous Beta reader. I was happy to see the end of Jimmy, he was some nasty piece of work. I loved the dogs Bo and Katie you had them spot on, exactly as I would imagine two ranch dogs would behave. I really enjoyed the banter you had going between Jon and Vivian at VHQ especially with the Stars Wars references, and that Jon, he sounds like one handsome man! I think I could really fall for him.

Once again, I thoroughly enjoyed it and I'm looking forward to reading the next one. Well done.

WAAH! I'm at the end of the story! SEQUEL SEQUEL...Oh, wait, dah...there are 2 more stories after this one...lol!

Now that is a way to end a story - HAPPY ENDINGS! BRAVA - AWESOME Story Dayna! :)

So odd that when the guys want to leave, they can't! What's up with that!

Spot on with the description of the 'crossroad' - very true - we all have these types of decisions to make in our lives, and hopefully choose the correct one to follow!

OMG - Matt swept away in the river :O Now who are these people at Headquarters? LOL ;)

This chapter is the reason WHY I LOVE this story! You can tell just how well you have these characters down. My heart is breaking over all the emotions that are coming out in this chapter! You have the whole H/C down to a science! BRAVA :)

OK...do you see it...see the heart RIPPED from my chest here! OMFG! Can you please send me some tissues here because I'm a mess! LOVE IT! :)

Why are 'our' boys so stubborn! GAH! I just wanna shake some sense into them.

WOW - Simon certainly has a lot to say now doesn't he! OUCH - those words can really sting! At least maybe with Simon fighting with Jeff, it might knock his attitude a peg or two down! So surprised that no one told (or that Jeff didn't ask) about how he was found in the barn!

Oh tormented Jeffy! Bogg was so there looking for you! Can I dope slap him, please...ROFLOL!

This one really pulled at my heart strings. Nice chapter!

So nice to see that Simon has a good support system that he can turn to when he's upset now! I bet that he is worried about what could happen to him! I'm sure that this was a HUGE WAKE UP CALL for him!

I feel for Bogg in this chapter - not knowing all of what happened that afternoon - feeling like it was all his fault! Good work there Ms. Daynawayna! :)

Now, I've read both versions of this chapter, and I do enjoy this revised chapter much more. You are so correct that Tracy should have seem them before 'going home'. Nice choice in changing the story on that!

So Jimmy got what he deserved, huh! What a way to go!