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Spartacus 2008-08-21 ch 22, anon.	abuseJust thought I'd say, This has got to be some of the best reads ever. Hell, I'm not even a fan of "fanfics". But I do love FF, And This fic kicks **. Thanks.
BlueFox of the Moon 2008-08-17 ch 22,	abuseWhy must you end it there?! >O Such a cliffhanger, wonder what's gonna happen between those two now? Amazing story and amazing chapter, can't wait for your next update:D
h0n3ybun 2008-08-09 ch 22,	abuseOMG finally the confrontation between Rikku and Gippal. It doesn't look like things will be pretty... I can only imagine the panic Gippal must be feeling. ^^; Good job with the chapter, I hope the next chapter will also be as great. Please update soon! :D
h0n3ybun 2008-08-08 ch 6,	abuseHehe gotta love how down to earth Baralai is. I'm glad Gippal chose to speak to him rather than his other options. :) Is there any chance that you might make a 'Paine's Story' and perhaps set her up with someone? cough Baralai cough It would seem that after all the time she spent with the trio, she'd eventually fall in love with one of them, wouldn't you think so? Well just a suggestion since all the other girls seemed to have paired up already. I do enjoy your _'s Story series and I hope you will continue it. ^^ Oh and have you thought about a Brother's Story, he was a somewhat important part of the Gullwings and he never really got any action in the game, it would be cool if he could be a part of something big, maybe not saving Spira but something else? Something involving the Al Bhed or Bikanel or something?
dpham 2008-07-29 ch 22,	abuseupdate soon!
Teh Healist 2008-07-27 ch 22,	abuseGood lord, it seems like every time you come out with a chapter, it ends in a cliff-hanger that far and away tops the previous chapter. I mean, geeze... it's like you have an unlimited pool of awesome/amazing/mind-boggling/all-of-the-above cliffhangers, and you just grab one out and slap it on. It really and truly makes me jealous. That's basically all that I have to say, aside from the standard "great job and keep going!" But I'm sure you get enough of those as it is. Oh... and I'm looking forward to hearing Gippal's speech. That will definitely be an interesting piece of work, I am sure. Healie
Shandy 2008-07-27 ch 22,	abuseWonderful chapter, especially ESPECIALLY the cliffhanger of an ending, which was inspired! I was glad to see Yuna up and well, I assume the child is okay or we would have presumably seen her more distraught.
YuniX-2 2008-07-20 ch 22,	abuseOMG! Cliffie! NO! This was such a good chapter, I want to see what happens next! I LOVE your writing. I do have one small critique this chapter though. When Tidus says "... hell, after what he did to Rikku and Yuna he deserves to be thrown to the wolves!" I thought it odd that he would mention Rikku before Yuna. Tidus cares for Rikku, sure, but he loves Yuna. Usually, when forming a sentence, people put the noun that is most important to them first. This is why two people forming a company to be named after themselves might get into a fight about who's name should come first in the company name. Since Tidus loves Yuna, it stands to reason that he would list her before Rikku. But yeah, otherwise, EXCELLENT chapter. Please keep writing! I can't wait to see what happens next!
kairiyuna15 2008-07-19 ch 22,	abuseOMG great chapter. i loved it. i glad Rikku and Yuna are ok. did Yuna lose the baby? I hope the next chapter does not take as long as this one did. please update soon. please.:)
kingleby 2008-07-19 ch 22,	abusewhoa, great chapter! i thought you wrote the tension and his emotions really well ^_^
grapelie 2008-07-19 ch 22, anon.	abusecliffhanger!! augh haha i hope u update soon! i think you captured Gippal's emotions perfectly. can't wait to read how rikku's reaction to gippal will be
Anna 2008-07-18 ch 22, anon.	abuseYay! Rikku's BACK!! Wonderful :)
Tiffi 2008-07-18 ch 22, anon.	abuseSorry I have not been reveiwing, but I was so happy to see you (finally) updating. And I was extremely happy when Rikku popped out at the end, so update quick!
Keyblademastergirl 2008-07-18 ch 22,	abuseYay!You updated!I think you did fine with everything.Can't wait for the next chapter!
FlowerGirl 2008-07-14 ch 21, anon.	abuseI read both of your stories in ine setting and al I can say is...wow. Amazing Rikku/Gippal story! One of the best I've seen. Please update soon!

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