|Reviews for Our Story|
| MoMo-ChAn1 6/30/05 . chapter 2
Finally, I've gotten around to logging in for this and checking all those little boxes so that I get alerted when you update. 'Cause I am so sick of just searching. This is so much easier, I swear.
Poor Gippal. He's not as suave as he was in the first one. He's so confused! I laugh at his confusion. Poor guy. You'll get better at it Gippal! Really!
He will, right? 'Cause seriously, if he doesn't... that's kinda sad, right?
| Jezzi 6/30/05 . chapter 2
Oh, so good already! I can't wait for you to update, every chapter that you write just sucks me in. Great job.
| Awesome Jaymee 6/30/05 . chapter 2
YES! Hallelujah! I really enjoyed the switching perspective part cause yah. It's nice to see Gippal's POV. _ can't wait for the next chapter. You're REALLY good at writing this. Best plot I've ever read and what makes it better is that is seems like a possibility after FFX-2.
| QTrepe432 6/30/05 . chapter 2
OH MY GOSH THIS IS THE BEST FLIPPING STORY I'VE READ FOR A LONG TIME! can't wait for the next chapter.
| InuKagNoMoreDreams 6/30/05 . chapter 2
YAY! Lol, I was mentally saying "Duh!" to Gippal the entire time. He probably still would've stared blankly at her if she held up a sign saying "I want to live with you!" and smacked him in the head with it. On the other hand, that might actually be amusing. Anyhoo, glad Gippal figured it out - great chapter! Update soon!
| Selffie 6/30/05 . chapter 2
| bluetinkerbell 6/30/05 . chapter 2
I like this Gippal. You just seem to know these characters inside and out. Keep up the great work!
| Sariah Loire 6/30/05 . chapter 2
-claps and cheers- X3 You finally got it right, Gippal! XD There's nothing more annoying than a guy who won't get your meaning. I mean, really, they're supposed to be mind readers!
| Procrastinator-starting2moro 6/30/05 . chapter 2
I thought the chapter was great! It was interesting to read Gippal's perspective. Update soon :)
| Seelenspiel 6/30/05 . chapter 2
you write so beautifully! its always amazing. pls update soon )
| Whispered Paradox 6/30/05 . chapter 2
Aw, bless, he was all nervous XD Heh. But anyway, awesome chapter. You captured Gippal perfectly - I think you got the narrative down to pat. Fantasmical D Expecially considering narratives are the hardest thing in the world to write ever. Hopefully the next chapter'll be up soon.
| IridescentFlight 6/30/05 . chapter 2
Yes! This was awesome! You have to write more sooner this time, otherwise I will send my platoon of the candy cane army after you. O_o
| Michelle 6/29/05 . chapter 2
Wow! You never cease to amaze me. Gippal's POV seems to match perfectly with his character. It at least matches with the POV of a man. Kind of slow to figure feelings out, not as confident as they seem to be, but overall they act cocky. Which is exactly how Gippal is. Anyway, I think you did a great job on this chapter and you're off to a good start so update as soon as you can!
| lste 6/29/05 . chapter 2
I am so confused rigt now lol!
| Ying Ying 54 6/29/05 . chapter 2
I followed "Rikku's Story" all the way through but didn't review because I'm absolutely horrible at critiques-sorry! :( But it was so great to hear that you were doing a sequel to it, since the original story was so well-written and enjoyable! I absolutely can't wait to read what you've got planned for the upcoming chapters-I think you're an amazingly talented writer and storyteller, and this just keeps getting better and better. _