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Reviews For: One in this World

chaste-aeon
2006-01-15
ch 1,
abuseI basically have no idea how these two main characters look. Nor do I know exactly what their pesonality is.

I liked the story. But... I guess I was pretty surprised when tears immediately sprang to her eyes. As I said, I don't know the characters at all. So it's just with me. :)

Haha, shocks, Lex. I was laughing softly to myself when Aid continued whatever she was doing, knowing she'll be ** him more. Seriously, those small scenes of smirks, snaps, streaks of stuborness... it again reminds me of Dhr. I could get use to this. lol
Lourdes777
2005-06-20
ch 1,
abuseJust so you know, I already reviewed, but I'm adding this fic to my favorites list!
LuvsDelkoSpeed
2005-06-12
ch 1,
abuseAw. That was awesome!

Please write more soon!
Lourdes_777
2005-06-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseDid you know that you are my hero? Well, you are. I loved it. Hip- Hip Horrah!
bigandcarrie
2005-06-12
ch 1,
abuseGreat. :) I loved it.
raingarcia022
2005-06-11
ch 1,
abuseFluff and more fluff, gotta love it. This is a long- awaited story, Jenna. I was so excited to see that you posted it. Great work. You gotta write more FA. :)
privateradios
2005-06-11
ch 1,
abuseI loved this. Many emotions but into one piece and very well written. Thank you. ;D
ukfan2003
2005-06-11
ch 1,
abuseLoved your story, espeically Flack's concern about Aiden's safety. The part where he talks about only getting one soulmate melted my heart.
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