lol. thats cute. very nice.

Sounds like perfect timing on Ed's part. Nicely done.

Is there more? please don't leave me here. good job though. really good.

It was lovely! The part about Faye covering her eyes with her arm could be refined, but overall it's fantastic. Short, but thoroughly amusing.

Cool idea. I really liked it. It's not all the time anyone sees just Faye and Jet together. Good job! ^^

Great interaction between these characters! And the ending works well too, though I have to say I hate being left in the dark!! I too, am glad to see Jet get some well-deserved attention!

I like it.
Very simple and to the point, but you still kept Jet slightly shrowded in some mystery. The speaking parts are a little confusing though. I couldn't tell if it was Jet or Faye talking sometimes.
But it's still a very nice story.

Very nice. I love seeing Jet get some attention from writers in fics.