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| Renegade.Ranger 2005-06-14 ch 1, | abuseI thought Leggy was going to die! It was an awsome story, I think there should be another chapter to this. Maybe Legolas would have to help Aragorn out in some way...hmm...anyways, I liked it, I don't care what anyone says, it was good...very good. |
| invisigoth3 2005-06-12 ch 1, | abuseGood story...hope you are going to write more. I would look forward to another. I liked the follwing line; Birds unsettled with calls of displeasure,. I used to live in the country and we owned a big forest and with that line I could remember that same sounds coming from the birds as my sister and I would play endlessly in the woods. We too did quite a bit of disruption in that forest. Your words were a perfect description of it. That was a long time ago and now I live in the city.. or least I call it the city. Good luck..hope to read of some of your work again. |