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Rice Kracker
2005-06-21 . chapter 4
So Tristan likes Serenity? SUURRE he does, we'll see about that. :-) Ryo/Bakura will break past his hard exterior, I hope, in whatever happens inside Tristan's house! Ooh... hahaha... ~_^ I just hope that Johji won't interrupt things -- that kid's got one helluva mouth! ^.^ Hope to see more soon!
Rice Kracker
2005-06-21 . chapter 3
Once again, I'm in awe of your ability to portray dialogue. Well, I think I can see Ryo (and Bakura's) true motives, heh, heh, it's so sweet, I love it! (tho Tristy's kinda acting like a jerk sometimes... ah well, he'll come around [evil grin])
Blood-Red White Rose
2005-06-20 . chapter 4
Yay. A good story that is updated regularly. I've been reading this since you started posting. I just have an annoying habit of not reviewing unless I feel I have something useful to say.
A lilmatchgirl
2005-06-20 . chapter 4
*stares in amazement* WHY aren't you getting more reviews for this?! People can't appreciate the good stuff, hmph. Anyways... the best part about the chapter is when Ryou tells Tristan about the way he lies... "common body language", lol. XD
More Bakura next chappie? Me hopes so. :)
A lilmatchgirl
2005-06-18 . chapter 3
Wow, forceful Ryou moments. *grins in delight* Kinda subtle, but that's so... *him*, lol. Leave the showy overkill to Yami and Kaiba, heh. Loved it! XD
Nanashio
2005-06-18 . chapter 3
Yup, speeding problem, Tris' just seems the type to have one ^^

Anywho, lovely updates, and I'm sorry for almost missing both chapters O.o; I thought it was a one-shot, and yay to see that that more has been added ^_^ The relationship development is well-thought, and believable, with Bakura's apparent interest, yup. I think I'm surprised that I haven't added this to my faves. So I shall add now.

PS, lovely writing ^_^
A lilmatchgirl
2005-06-14 . chapter 2
Ohh, *interesting* fic... you've actually made Ryou kind of a willing participant in Bakura's dealings... well, of a sort. Very cool, I'd love to see how this turns out. Update soon, please! XD
Rice Kracker
2005-06-14 . chapter 2
(mutters to self) What are you up to, "Ryo," telling Joey about this? Hm, I sense trouble on the horizon... Heh, well I'm liking the plot so far, as it's starting to thicken a bit. Also enjoying the dialogue too, very street-smartish, in my opinion. You know, another thing I've noticed is just how aggressive and badboy-like Tristan is... I guess I've always saw him as a nice guy (funny, since he's supposed to be aggressive in the anime and -manga- especially. Eh, ah well). 'sides, you know what they say about nice guys finishing last. ^^
Nanashio
2005-06-13 . chapter 1
Hm, fascinating. Heh, that's the only word I can come up for it, as the whole story just strikes me as interesting.

Thank you for the nice outlook. I like the idea of Bakura helping Tristan, willingly. Or perhaps helping him for his own benefit. But either way, it's believable, well-written, and I admire you for writing such a fic ^_^
Higuchimon
2005-06-12 . chapter 1
That was extremely good. :) I loved it a lot. Given what I've heard about some of the AE arc, it could also be considered a standalone, I think. Your mileage may vary. :) Though what you'd think of for how he repaid his debt could be infinitly more interesting. It's up to you. But it was good, no matter what.
Lethe Seraph
2005-06-12 . chapter 1
How cool. You write very well, and I loved reading this. It's very in character on all their parts (in my opinion!), and plausible. I'd love to see what happens after this, but it stands well on its own.

::thumbs up:: Awesome job.
Rice Kracker
2005-06-12 . chapter 1
GASSPP!! Does that mean that Tristan's in Bakura's debt? MWA ha ha... It makes me wonder when and WHAT Bakura will collect... (And thusly I'd think Tristy should've been HAPPY to be in Bakura's debt, hehehe...) I really like this, the story is told simply, yet eloquently (I say this because of the hidden details that required me to think a bit, not one of my strong suits). I hope this isn't a one-shot -- I'd love to see more! Adding to favorites and alerts, and thanks for sharing this!
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