Got my eyes tearing up there (

that was different. verry repetive. i liked it.

I feel like crying. It's so sad but it's beautiful how you write it, you describe it perfectly. Plus it's kinda true, I mean that happens a lot in real life. I loved it. Keep the good work up.

Quite sad. I feel even more depressed reading this than I would be usually because I read this while listening to "Love" by John Lennon. It really sets the mood with the mournful piano and voice. Anyway, another good one..

aw... that's sad. :( but well written, i must say.

Beautiful.

It doesn't suck! It may be sad, but it doesn't suck! It's actually really good. You described the feelings really well. When you love someone (not that I would know about love), for me it would be more like... like a lot, more than a friend, you feel really special and happy, and then you're turned down, and you go crashing back down to earth, reality being the hard slap in the face. I like it. Can't wait to read the others!

Kenny

WOW that was really powerful The long red row seemed to represent her love her blood her pain her anger everything but I guess that is what the color red does huh? Well I am going off to read the rest of your one shots which I got an author alerts bye!

Suzaku's Rose

Thats a good one-shot.. realy deep and meaningful I think.. :)