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Reviews For: Rouge Knight - Reviews: Page 1 of 3

Chris ShadowMoon
2008-03-29
ch 6,
abuseOk, you have asked me for a review... this is what I got

First off... I have no ** clue what's going on. Slow down and explain what the hell is going on for all the people reading this in a rewrite (or, you could just send me an explination to

sannixx
at
yahoo

and I could do it for you in my free time.)

Secondly, is there incest in this story? That's a little creepy.

And why is Ranma ok with having sex as a girl? I'm just not following this at all.

What was the style that Nodoka and Kimiko used, and how does it relate to the style Ranma made up?

Who was the guy who asked Ranma to make up the saber style?

WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON?!? For like the third time.

If the email above didn't transfer, just go to the email button on my Bio and get it from there... well, let me know. I do like this, but it's confusing. One of the most confusing ones I've ever read, to be precise.

The other was a Naruto one where almost everyone was the opposite gender (female Naruto and Sasuke, Neji, Lee, Male Hinata, Ino, Sakura, ect) and Minato and naruto's mom (can't remember the name for the life of me) never died, and Naruto is banished because they believe she was running of to join with the female orochimaru... it just wasn't written all that great. i still have no idea what the ** was going on.
iceland
2006-12-27
ch 1,
abuseit is a good story to read.
tsukiyomi-chan
2005-10-10
ch 1,
abusei like this story, its pretty interesting. i really like the mix of blessings on ranma, instead of picking something to give her, give her all of them. hehe, brilliant, and being able to give them to nabs and kas, even better. i hope you write more on this one. till later. ^^
Rignach
2005-08-04
ch 6,
abuseGreat story. We will get hopefull a lot more chapters to read.

Tzeentch likes all the transformation magic that is around the human and has gifted the ability to change at will

As in chapter 5 stated does it mean he/she is able to change at will between forms and gender. Does he now have a male and female id?

I think i like the new dna mix.

but your story is a litte confusing so i will read it one chapter one again. does not remember too much about it. was to long ago.
Innortal
2005-08-01
ch 6,
abuseNot bad. So did Kasumi curse herself as well? Keep writing.

Innortal
ranger5
2005-07-04
ch 6,
abuseThis is a rather strange but well put together story I just can't stop reading. Kinda like your Tench fic Kotetsu Veriti (sp) Looking forward to more.
Wonderbee31
2005-07-04
ch 6,
abuseGood part here, and looking forward to how Ranma dnt ehgirls get around and what's going to happen when they go on this new trip, as well as what the fathers might try to do when they leave.
Duke
2005-06-27
ch 5, anon.
abuseVery interesting story. It is a unique one that I have not seen ever. At times it can be confusing as to what has occured and what is happening. The flashbacks and explenations are not pointed out during the story, therefore it makes it hard to follow. Otherwise it is a interestingly good story. Keep it up.
Wonderbee31
2005-06-27
ch 5,
abuseInteresting part here, and it looks like Ranma/Ranko is in for very interesting times, as well as it looks as though their love life is going to be in for more upsets. Too bad that the spirits won't leave him/her alone, though it'll be fun to see where the story takes this direction from here on in.
LordThom
2005-06-27
ch 5,
abuse...yeah...

uhm you lost me. To be honest somewhere around the end of the first chapter, I was sceptical but now I havn't the foggiest notion of what the hell you are trying here tho... not at all
Jerry Unipeg
2005-06-27
ch 5,
abuseI LOVE THIS CHAPTER! OH BOY! Talking about a upgrade!
Darkepyon
2005-06-27
ch 5,
abuse? am i the only one confused ?? this chapter is slightly umm chaotic i guess honestly i just cant see where your goin with this one its like you had a god idea and now your trying to jump away from that paticular idea as far as possible i mean where the hell did divine beings come into this...I mean you go from ranma tring to make anything goes light saber fighting to him joining up with kasumi and nabiki ok thats feasible but then you some how just drop this bomb on top of that i mean its like you got bored with your original idea and just started brain storming i understand everything even the rebirth part and i even see where you got that he was part cat that does make sense but the deity part just seems offly random.
phoenix.ru
2005-06-26
ch 5,
abuse^_^
Well, this was FUN ^_^
I wonder, just WHAT will he/she look like NOW?!?!?
Oh, and I still don't see any REAL x-ovver with SW.
If you are planning to release ... "this" into that Universe ^_^ Oh... it can be such fun!!
Nairojam
2005-06-26
ch 5,
abuseUm, okay, this has Absolutely nothing to due with what has happened before. How exactly does this connect to this story?
animewatcher
2005-06-26
ch 4,
abusewow, this was surprising, very intersting story the star wars cross over is not very well defined yet but i like very much the story. I hope the next chapter is close
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