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Lost in New York
2008-07-06
ch 1,
abuseJust want to say one more thing.. Update soon, ok?:)
Lost in New York
2008-07-04
ch 9,
abuseOh my god, your story was so amazing. I liked it very much. I have been reading it over and over again. I'm so glad that I found it!:)
Princess-Leasel
2006-10-05
ch 8,
abuseomg! im so happy i found this story. i read it sso long and coz i didnt have an account i couldnt save it lol. i think its a gr8 story!
kukrae
2006-03-05
ch 9,
abuseNew to this particular fandom, however, I do hope that you continue this story. It's March now, think an update could happen? Well written and interesting.
MidnightCrime
2005-12-25
ch 9,
abuseIt took me forever to read this. Please update soon. You have me hooked. I love Mac/Stella and this is great! I cant wait tell i read the next one. Merry Christmas!
kiara
2005-12-22
ch 9, anon.
abusehey! AWESOME story! fantastic mac/stella back-story...and can't wait for more! pls update soon!

Cheers!
StarrySkies
2005-12-11
ch 9,
abuseFinally, it's letting me leave a review! 2 days trying... I was so glad to see you updated. Another great chapter. I really want to go back and read the whole story again. It makes sense to me now, why she acted that way towards the last part of ch 8. My favorite part was where she was trying to leave the baby and looking at the Greek words on the necklace. Heartbreaking. And you wrote it so beautifully.

"As their lips touched, tears rolled down her cheek and onto his mouth." -- That was a great line. Can't wait for Chapter 10!
Dizzy-Dreamer
2005-12-11
ch 9,
abuseOh my hell... is really all I can say. I've had this link bookmarked for a while and it's only now I'm ill and procrastinating that I've gotten a chance to sit and read... and really - wow. It's so intricately twisted, with each chapter there's another fork in the road and you never know where it's going next. I have to say I never expected the kid to be Stella's... even when she found the necklace, to be honest.

Well, I'm certainly hooked and I hope there'll be another update sometime soon!
Christieanne-Anna
2005-12-10
ch 9,
abuseReally great chapter.
privateradios
2005-12-09
ch 9,
abuseMust say that your writting is just beyond gorgeous. Very impressed despite the fact of how the storyline is going. If it wasn't for your writting, I'm not sure I would have been so pleased with this.

I will continue reading but I had to mention how your writting just grabs and pulls me in. Doesn't make me want to stop but instead keep me there.

Awesome job with that.
Spaceape
2005-12-09
ch 9,
abuseWOW!
love you story, very emotional and it has everything !
keep it up !
Steeldust-01
2005-12-08
ch 9,
abuseWOW
This chapter is very emotional and I
really love it. Please keep it up ...
you're great !
Anon
2005-12-08
ch 9, anon.
abuseThe prose, their feelings, everything just fits perfectly. I love it.
CursedLyfe
2005-11-14
ch 8,
abuseOne question. What is the URL of the site where you got your award from? I can't seem to find this site. Great job by the way and keep up the great work!
salazar
2005-11-06
ch 8, anon.
abuseholy **! this fic is fantastic! there aren't enough adjectives to describe how great your work is. you've got an amazing amount of talent. i've never enjoyed a peice of fanfiction this much. very vivid description without being overbearing. you've got to finish this. we'll all die if you don't. thank you for sharing. u rock out loud!
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