I love the fact that you don't stray too far from the charaters persona when writing. The only thing I didn't like was that the word "absently" was a bit overused, but overall a great fic.

A fantastic conclusion to a story that's so absolutely possible within the confines of the SF64 game. An amazing read overall (as with all of your stories), and it's one I'm sad to see finished.

What are you going to write next?

All that I can say about this is: wow.
You have created a storyline, which, even though it is never even hinted at, is so plausible, it meshes perfectly with every point of the game. Bravo.

I love, as always, how you continue to wrap things up so well. The adding of exact lines from Star Fox 64 was a very nice touch.

But, as you said, this isn't quite the ending. I'm curious as to what you're going to do with it. Now to wait.

You know, now that I think about it, Andross doesn't have to lose the war. This is one of your few fics that actually follows the timeline given in the games directly, but not everything has to happen...

So, the question is - what will happen? Only time will tell.

Another good chapter. Not much to say. Other than start spacing the chapters when they switch setting with * * * or something.

Not seen you on IM much lately. Miss ya! *hugs*

Wow. What a great, great story this has turned out to be. How will it end though? Short of the obvious part of Andross losing the war, anything can still go.

Can't wait to see how this turns out.

Interesting idea, and very well executed. I'd like to see how this ends.

Well, it was a long bumpy ride, but you made it. I think the chapter came out nicely. You worked so ** it. *huggles*

As usual, keep up the good work.

Wow, this is incredible. One of the best things is how you portray Andross, although he's obviously a bad guy, he's not completely evil. Far more realistic than the game, really.

I know this says section six, but ignroe that.

It's a good chapter. Sorry I wasn't around to give thoughts about the last part, but it worked in the end. Keep up the good work.

Another good chapter. I would have liked a little more detail in James' descriptions, but I guess that would have pushed it to being al ittle long.

I see you added a little bit to the end, I don't remember seeing that yesterday when you showed me the chapter.

Good work once again.

It's a kick-** story, even if it's a tad... unusual!
Anyway, you rock, keep writing!

(Be careful, you submited the *whole* story instead of only chapter 8)

And once again you run off with another 'alternate reality' fic, or as some would say, a 'this really could have happened if you think about it' fic.

As always, it's a great read. I can't wait to see where you go with this.

And again, big R. I'm wondering if you plan to go the whole game?