OH... Oh no. That's the end? THAT'S THE END? You can't end it there!
Holy crap. What a beautifully set piece. When you described the dance. Holy crap.
I loved the writing of this piece. Thank you for it. Sorry it took four years to review. Hope you don't mind :-)

Loved this...
He moved, plunging her backwards into a dramatic dip, and she hung helplessly in his arms, eyes glittering with barely contained rage. She countered, hauled herself up out of the submissive position and spun away, but it was as if the dance now mimicked real life. With a yank he reeled her back into his arms like a yo-yo on a string. There he held her prisoner – her back to his chest, her body tucked into his hips, his chin nestled into her shoulder. He seemed unable to release her. Imprisoned against the hard planes of his body, they moved across the dance floor in their heated embrace. He impaled her with his eyes, brainwashing her with his body in a hot grinding embrace.

Wow!! Wonderful start!! You really should continue!

Loved this story

you so have to continue please :)

We need more...please.

hey...it was wonderful...i know nth about ballroom dancing but i could feel their emotions...i belive this is a oneshot but could u write a sequel or sth...it was really good...excellent in fact

wow. I loved how you captured the intensity of the dance part, especially that final dance. I don't have time to read the whole thing now, but I'm definately hooked.

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“In fact, I think we might need to bring a mop for the drool.”
"Grissom, the person everyone accused of having the emotional depth of a puddle..."

a puddle..nice metaphor

how come you put an A/N in the second chapter instead of...well a chapter? is there another chapter to come?

Oh when oh when is this going to continue, this is to good to keep in the closet...keep writing...

I love this story! Do you have plans to continue it? The idea of socially retarded geeks being secret champion dancers sounds too funny to be taken seriously on the surface, but you make it seem totally believable and wrote it well. I just need to know how it ends!

WOW! that was AWESOME! i havent read anything so awesome! you get a 10 our of 10!

~kate

there is no 2nd chapter I would really like to read it:(

Wow! That was amazing. I thought that Sara being a World Dance Whatever would be kinda weird because of all of the dance jargon, but you turned it into something so perfect that I couldn't stop reading. Keep going, please. I need to know more. lol.

Rachel

Wow. That was incredible. I loved the way you (both?) wrote the dancing scene. I know nothing at all about dancing and I was a bit weary about reading this because I would be lost if you started mentioning steps and everything, but to my suprise, you didn't. Fantastic job. It was a real treat to read. (>-)

also, i forgot to mention the mad golden girl props. oh blanche, she could SO work that...

well hot ** woman. that was some damn fine emoting. clearly i'm still reeling from it as i can only sit here and swear and grasp at adjectives. the dancing? oh the dancing. and the fact that it didn't change anything -- so harsh and yet so very them. also, the quote from frost -- FAN-FRICKIN-TASTIC clincher. i thought your note was an addendum and my heart leapt in excitement. the lack of resolution however works for their relationship because the day those two have closure will be the day i go skiing in hell. oh man, i keep going back to that line from frost though...