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| whatmaybe 2007-09-28 ch 2, anon. | abusehey...it was wonderful...i know nth about ballroom dancing but i could feel their emotions...i belive this is a oneshot but could u write a sequel or sth...it was really good...excellent in fact |
| contrarymotion 2007-07-10 ch 1,  | abusewow. I loved how you captured the intensity of the dance part, especially that final dance. I don't have time to read the whole thing now, but I'm definately hooked. Fav lines: “In fact, I think we might need to bring a mop for the drool.” "Grissom, the person everyone accused of having the emotional depth of a puddle..." a puddle..nice metaphor |
| The Smoose 2007-05-29 ch 2, | abusehow come you put an A/N in the second chapter instead of...well a chapter? is there another chapter to come? |
| NickyStokes 2007-03-12 ch 2, | abuseOh when oh when is this going to continue, this is to good to keep in the closet...keep writing... |
| Cherrybomb5 2006-02-26 ch 2, | abuseI love this story! Do you have plans to continue it? The idea of socially retarded geeks being secret champion dancers sounds too funny to be taken seriously on the surface, but you make it seem totally believable and wrote it well. I just need to know how it ends! |
| QueenKate 2005-07-25 ch 2, | abuseWOW! that was AWESOME! i havent read anything so awesome! you get a 10 our of 10! ~kate |
| csmit99 2005-07-10 ch 2, | abusethere is no 2nd chapter I would really like to read it:( |
| lostondarox 2005-07-06 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was amazing. I thought that Sara being a World Dance Whatever would be kinda weird because of all of the dance jargon, but you turned it into something so perfect that I couldn't stop reading. Keep going, please. I need to know more. lol. Rachel |
| CarbyluvYTDAW 2005-07-04 ch 2, | abuseWow. That was incredible. I loved the way you (both?) wrote the dancing scene. I know nothing at all about dancing and I was a bit weary about reading this because I would be lost if you started mentioning steps and everything, but to my suprise, you didn't. Fantastic job. It was a real treat to read. (>-) |
| variousandsundry 2005-06-20 ch 2, | abusealso, i forgot to mention the mad golden girl props. oh blanche, she could SO work that... |
| variousandsundry 2005-06-20 ch 1, | abusewell hot ** woman. that was some damn fine emoting. clearly i'm still reeling from it as i can only sit here and swear and grasp at adjectives. the dancing? oh the dancing. and the fact that it didn't change anything -- so harsh and yet so very them. also, the quote from frost -- FAN-FRICKIN-TASTIC clincher. i thought your note was an addendum and my heart leapt in excitement. the lack of resolution however works for their relationship because the day those two have closure will be the day i go skiing in hell. oh man, i keep going back to that line from frost though... |
| ClariceS 2005-06-15 ch 1, | abuseHey Mel,I absolutely love your new story!It is so different from other GSR fics(not that the other stories are bad!)and I can't wait to read the next chapter!Talk to you soon!*hugs* |
| geeklovegirl 2005-06-14 ch 2, | abuseOh! That was beautiful! I am a G/SR addict, and that made my day. |
| Denese925 2005-06-14 ch 2, | abuseChapter 1 is amazing but where is chapter 2? |
| dancechik487 2005-06-13 ch 1, | abuseHey sis. We did so good. Everyone absolutely loves our story. YAY! Man that tango scene was hot. Maybe we'll continue working on stories at work. Love Ya! |