please update really good story!

It would be a kriffing shame if this story remained unfinished. IMO it's one of the best available on ... :)

I've really enjoyed reading this, it's very enjoyable and is a nice view of Luke's journey. It would be good to see a little bit more of the world outside the Jedi, a little bit but not too much more. Anyway, please update. You've left it at the point where things are getting interesting.

I just wanted to say I greatly enjoyed this story, I don't know much about Star Wars beyond the films & am not usually a reader of this fandom...but I enjoyed ur story. It is a shame it has apparently fallen by the wayside right before what appears to be the moment when things take shape. I was very interested to see what you had planned. Anyways, in spite of that I am definitely a fan of what has been put out & will continue to enjoy it.

Hi! Any chance of this being continued? It's a brilliant fic... great idea, well-written, exciting, well-structured and foreshadowed... One of the best I've read, except for its unfinishedness. :)
Even if not, it was well worth reading, and thank you for it.
-Wings

I really have enjoyed your story. It is really thrilling to read. However I was wondering when you were next going to update as it has been a while and I would like to know what is supposed to happen next.

This story is really interesting. The way you build up momentum is very captivating and I like the way you portray the chaerecters. It's too bad you stopped writing it.
I hope that you continue someday.

this is the second story I've read where the loss of Mara's Force abilities is explained by a Force inhibitor. Is there actually something to that?

Hi Ash,

You must update this story. I read it all within two days - it's amongst the best ones I've ever read.

You can't let this die - your readers demand constant updates :)

Wow. Really. This is probably one of the best canon divergence fics I've read in a long time. I was thinking about it earlier, and I realized that convincingly getting Mara and Luke together earlier than they did originally is very difficult, because of the issues both of them have, but you've done a very good job. I hope to see more of this story sometime in the future.

Please update, it is almost one year since you updated. Please update now!

Ash, I love all your stories, especially this one and Emerald. PLEASE update this story. I love the plot, love Luke and Mara, love everything!! We beg you to finish this story.

Please update. Don't let this story die.

You ever going to work on this story?

Definately one of my favorites of all time, but it's disappointing that you stopped writing it right when the story would start getting really interesting, not that what you have written isn't interesting.

While I would absolutely love it if you wrote more to this story, I would understand it if you didn't.

Hey this is fantastic! I'm already hooked :)
Looking forward to a great story based on this riveting opening chapter. Now you'll have me reading all week when I should be writing ;)