Great job!It was amazing!You shpuld defintely think about making more chapters!At least,if you're inclined,that is.Writing these seem to take a lot of time and energy.Well,I congradulate you for writing one of the best one-shots I have ever read!btw,my name's Callie.I'd like to write one,but I'm not sure how,or if it's free...

This made me dislike Sango more than what I already do. :D


I LUFF MIRKAG & this fic. NICE JOB!

oh that was a very cute, funny story. it was really sweet, i loved it

Well overall the one-shot was cute but it was very immature in spots (kinda like how I started out.. ;) ) and there was a few spelling errors and a couple of spots where you repeated the same line twice. But I think if you reread it and make those corrections your story would be a lot better than it already is. So good job on this one, I can't wait to read more of your work and watch you improve as a writer. Be sure to check out my one-shots too! ;)

i totally think kagome and miroku r an awsome couple. inuyasha is so heartless. she should give up on him.. any way awsome you r amazing! ;)

OMG! SEQUAL PWEASE! so CCUUTTEE!

cute

loved it

Funny. Just what I've come to expect from you. :) Thanks for including Kilala in your story, too! She's so cute! You might wanna change your summary, though, 'cause it says 'Kikyo' instead of 'Sango'.

KELLY I HATE YOU THIS WAS A WASTE OF MY TIME AND I AM GOING TO FIND YOU AND KILL YOU FOR WASTING 30 MINUTES OF MY LIFE YOU BITCH!!
{lol i really liked this story and hope you update soon or i will hit you in the face with a fish.

I liked it alot

Awesome story I absolutely love this pairing Heh i like the ending i thought that was funny. But anyway awesome story i look forward to reading more of ur work in the future

kool stupid inuyasha he missed out lucky miroku

That was good...and funny!
Aya SL

hey this is a kool story i hope you do another ch. but if you don't want to i understand and i just want to tell you(again)that this story rules and trust me i've read alot of story's