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| Anne Herbold 2007-03-11 ch 2, | abuseOh dear god...so funny...tears of laughter are rolling down my face! all of it was just so funny and im only on chapter 2!“Yes Mr. Worrypants!” She stood up properly and placed the plate back onto the silver surface. “Don’t you dare touch that broccoli or I’ll snap your hand off...with my mouth.” wow...that quote just introduced me to a completely different side of sara! so good...and the whole conversation between liz, grissom, molly, and mindy just blew me away! i swear molly and mindy go to my school! "BYE SEXY!" and the whole grunting and "I see freaky dead people!" was just fantastic, i almost peed in my seat from laughing so much! keep up the fantastic work! |
| hollie 2006-08-30 ch 9, anon. | abuseomg, omg, omg. that was soo funny. i was laughing so hard, i swear i almost died. |
| lemonjelly 2005-11-06 ch 9, | abuseeheehee, you're a GENIUS. i gotta get onto this asparagus one now. and i like broccoli. |
| Review1234 2005-08-22 ch 9, anon. | abuseOh, God, not again, although, I could definitely read this story again and again and again and... You get the point. Very creative and too fun. Oh, God, Lizzy, I almost wet myself. And that's pretty hard for a Waffle to do, you know? And I loved the new Molly, but my favorite character is still Liz. I think you painted a very detailed picture of her. Anyway, fabulous story, and I thank you for writing; oh, and please, keep writing! |
| outrageous band geek 2005-08-21 ch 8, | abusemuahahahhahhaha... i guess the spork is really dead huh? that makes me sad :-( my friend had a funeral for a spork once... or was that the spoon? i can't remember!anywhoo... GREAT CHAPTER!keep it up! |
| Review1234 2005-08-20 ch 8, anon. | abuseGod, Lizzy, and I thought I was crazy. Yeah, me, Waffle... Sigh, you and my friend are tied for the most random person in the universe. I can't even begin to start comparing you two. It would take me forever. Anyway, excellent chapter, but really, the whole story is awesome anyway. Finally! I was wondering where Ecklie was! Ha! And he fell off the edge of a cliff. All the better! My favorite out of three crazy Chicago people would have to be Liz. I think she has the most personality, but they are all funny. Now Nick has a new stalker. Okay, well, my energy is going up because I'm on my second cup of green tea in less than an hour. So, thanks for writing, and I'm sorry about those stupid tornados. You are the best, Lizzy. |
| rojaji 2005-08-20 ch 8, | abuseWow, tornado? Glad you're all right, sucks about the damage but at least not too many were hurt. Just reminds me how glad I am to be in the Pacific Northwest - of course until we get that huge earthquake that they've been predicting for the last several years now. I like Mindy the best - she totally cracks me up. Good thing Liz is the one based off of you - she's the sanest! Brass pulling a trick on gullible Nicky, and of course he answers when mama Catherine calls! Keep up the good work. |
| perfectcrime 2005-08-20 ch 8, | abuseThis is hilarious! I alwost wish it was a show. but then it wouldn't be as funny. |
| Review1234 2005-08-11 ch 7, anon. | abuseOh, crap, last time I forgot to mention that this is Waffle. Hey, how's it going? Anyway, that... was...incredously... hilarious! Oh, I almost had gas myself! Okay, that was a little bit too much information. Oh, I loved it, especially, when Grissom says, "I think Nick was here." And Sara's reply, "No duh, Sherlock." Priceless. Oh, just a little something for Sara: "Take beano before, they'll beano gas." Ohj, now I have inspiration for a quote! Well, I'll talk to you later on the guide! Chitty-Chitty-Bang-Bang does rule! |
| outrageous band geek 2005-08-11 ch 7, | abusehahahahahahahahaha... whatever happened to the poor spork? NO it died!muahahahahahahaha... i lick people who put their hands over my mouth too. CONTINUE por favor! |
| rozzy07 2005-08-10 ch 7, | abuseSee, like I told my mother repeatedly Broccoli is not good for you, cos' look what it's done to poor Sara... Go, write more please, and keep these little flashes of wonderful insanity popping up to keep my very much entertained indeedee (Very Phillip K Dick in places...!!). Great writing. |
| everybetty 2005-08-03 ch 6, | abusei normally don't like humor/parody stories- but this one is so far off the wall i'm giggling in spite of myself... "And I have a feeling we’ll be dealing with it soon as well." hee Grissom is referring to *farts* hee hee where is my Nicky ? i can't help but laugh picturing him singing that song at the top of his lungs- completely off-key, of course :) |
| Review1234 2005-08-03 ch 6, anon. | abuseNice job, Lizzy! Excellent work! I was wondering where Catherine was, and, though I'll probably regret saying this, poor Sara! The woman just killed the father of three baby eaglets and has gas! I can't wait to see where that goes! Oh, please, keep going! This story is way too funny. And I'm still trying to figure out why Ecklie bought European jeeps to bring to bomb sight. Thanks for writing! |
| Review1234 2005-08-03 ch 3, anon. | abuseLizzy, you and I have so much in common. I'm only half way through this incredulously funny story and I had to grab another pair of Depends. Oh, has Rosie read this? I think she would like it. Did Nick's jeep have a radio? If it did, I don't think it would work in the rainforest, seeing as it is shrouded by thousands of trees. Trust me; I know what trees can do to a radio signal. Okay, let's see if I can answer the three questions at the end of this chapter. 1. They will be ejected from their seats, and will be stuck in the forest with Nick, or the Hottie. 2. Because she's Sara and she needed a life; so, she decided to obsess about broccoli instead of Grissom. 3. Because he's Ecklie and he has a unique strain of insanity/ stupid/ curtness! Or the answer to all of these could be I'll read on and find out! Anyway, this story is too funny, and I'm going to read it devoutly. If you could get back to be, my e-mails right there. If you can't, that's alright, too! Thanks for this great story! |
| rojaji 2005-07-28 ch 5, | abuseok. this is so bizarre I love it. Sara with the broccoli - hilarious. Please keep writing! |