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Xahtonnoj
2008-12-22 . chapter 14
Your last line made me "Oh-ho" with morbid glee and the expectation of liquid awesomeness. :D

Thank you, Oni-Gil. I appreciate the gift. *digi-hug*
And now to figure out how to write a gift-fic with a dying keyboard...
-V
Shirosenshi Kisetsu 116
2008-01-06 . chapter 13
A title? How about Echo's of darkness/power...Came up with that in like 5 seconds...It sucks I know
Shirosenshi Kisetsu 116
2008-01-06 . chapter 7
"Can I keep my clothes?"
That was a good one, had me laughing for hours
Drizzit Dudden
2007-09-09 . chapter 9
Tantalizing is the word for this fic. Interpret that as you will. The Begrudging Fellowship has a great dynamic, and I fully support Echo's verbal attacks on her Highship. Can't even swim? *derisive snort* A great fic. Poor Morpha is about to get her jellified backside handed to her, isn't she? *evil grin*
Leon
2007-09-09 . chapter 8
Great plot twist! Very good cinematic possiblities for this chapter, and that is the highest praise that I can give. I've also grown quite fond of Echo, so keep doing your thing, it's working, that's for sure.
Mr.Mandrake
2007-09-08 . chapter 7
Fantastic! Echo is a great anti-hero. 'Miladydom', 'Majestichood', etcetera? You are quite the author of witty sarcasm, aren't you? It was truly FOCF. :) The idea of a rampaging superwarrior bent on Triforce supremacy is truly compelling, and I am looking forward to the next chapter. My only complaint is that, aside from Echo's bleeding impressive shadow-transport ability, the wielder of the Triforce of Power doesn't seem to be much more powerful than his template. Of course, this opinion stems from my love of energy manipulation desriptions. Oh well. Superb job on the energy cage, by the way. How is Freya a Mary-Sue, if you don't mind my asking?
A very good story, over all. Hopefully you will post chapter 14 by the time I get there!
Mr.Mandrake
Mr.Mandrake
2007-08-21 . chapter 3
I feel really insulted right now. Echo defeated Ganondorf in a frickin' minute, tops! I had to play tennis with that evil Holy-Realm Defiler for at least twenty minutes and two fairies before I was able to defeat him, and Echo gets hit in the collarbone once!Once! *sigh* That is the price you pay for having a realistic(well, somewhat realistic)story. Oh, well. At lest we get to see how powerful the bearer of two thirds of the Triforce can be. A good story and concept, all you need to do is research battle scenes a bit and your story will be a lot stronger.
Vaati's Servant
2006-08-18 . chapter 13
Cool!
The-world-needs-peace
2006-07-02 . chapter 13
Yay! You are alive! Whoot!
Anyway, what's Feya thinking? Trust Deity Link!? Has that girl gone isane?! Well, I guess she doesn't have a choice. Or so she thinks... hm...
Anywho...I don't know if Fierce Diety can have a name... Well, hm... Oh wait, wait! I got it! Light! Call him Light! Well, okay, he's no Angel, but eh, I tried.
Have you been reading my story? You better be! You're the whole reason I started it! I don't care if you leave a review or not, just let me know that you actually bother with it! Please?
The-world-needs-peace
2006-02-25 . chapter 12
That's right missy, you should be sorry for taking so long! >-C But I'll forgive you, just 'cause this story's so good. ^_^
Anyway, I'm glad you updated (Eventually) and I am happy to see it again. I was starting to wonder what happened to it. So please don't become absent again, and try to continue updating!
Thunderstorm101
2005-12-31 . chapter 11
How about...Shadow of Power? You said you need a new power, and Dark Link is a shadow, and the whole conflict is over the Triforce of Power, so...Shadow of Power.

Thanks for the update! Are they gonna fight Morpha? Cool.
The-world-needs-peace
2005-12-31 . chapter 11
Wow! Awesome story! Love the characters, and the plot, escpecially Taren, you just gotta love him! I say, don't take... like... two months or something to update. THAT WOULD BE TORTURE!! I mean, this is so great in writing style and everything, I'd really like to see how this turns out. I know Echo isn't evil!
About your Title...
Well, erm... -.- Uh...0_0 hm... U.U' I can't think of anything! >-C Gr... I personally like the Title "The Shadow Lord", why do you want a new one?
Wait...wait...something's coming...Oo! I only just now came up with it, (and I personally think it sucks) but how about "(The) Dark Quest"?
Thunderstorm101
2005-10-01 . chapter 10
Don't look at me, I'm bad at names. The only thing I ask is that you come up with a solution where the pieces of the Triforce are intact and in separate people, and that Echo comes out of it alive.

^_^ I
canihavea-soda
2005-09-06 . chapter 9
Lol, glad to know my reviews amuse [grins]. Methinks I'll do a running review again; that way I won't forget what I want to say!

In the Gerudo scene, I particularly like the last line with the man frowning 'sadly'. I'm not quite sure how to actually take that - it could have many meanings. Did you mean for him to be truly sorry that he would have to kill her? Or (this is how it came across to me), was he just mocking her, pretending to be sad about having to kill her, but really glad that he'd be able to get the piece out of her? I'm probably just being daft here, but to me, it wasn't clear. (LOL, I *do* nitpick, don't I? BUT, I only do it because there's nothing else to grumble about :P It's nice to see people who can spell and grasp grammar concepts!)

[Blinks, wipes away drool] FierceDeityLink! [Squeaks]. Yes, score! Another Link to add to our collection! [Giggles].

[Pettles the Sheik.]

OH! Just another nitpick in the fourth section. '"Well, here she is," Echo announces'
Vaati's Servant
2005-09-05 . chapter 8
oohh...so cool!
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