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becc 2008-12-08 . chapter 1
I realize it has been a long time since you updated any of your stories, but I'm really hoping you haven't completely abandoned us! Please continue this story. I want to know what the history is between Shayla and Anders!
Melissa 2008-07-31 . chapter 7
AH! Finish please! It's SO SOSOSOSOSO good! Just like the court!
arrimas 2008-06-29 . chapter 7
hey!
i loved your story and i'd love to read the rest if you finished it? would you? that'd be awesome.
arrimas
anon 2008-01-10 . chapter 7
Update!
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Dark Bunny 2007-10-02 . chapter 7
This is an AWESOME fanfic
You HAVE to update with the new chapter- it's just so good!
=D
anonymous 2007-08-28 . chapter 1
This story is fantastic, and i keep cheching, but alas there have been no updates in a year! Please say you haven't abandoned this story. I hope there'll be an update in the near future. Please?
gypsyhick 2007-06-30 . chapter 1
I noticed an anniversary coming up--
It seems you have a whopping 8 days left to get this story updated within a year.
Come on, Come on! You can do it! You can do it! GO, Rah, Rah!
;)
* Here's wishing inspirational muse energy to guide you out of any plot holes you may fallen into*
lily 2007-06-27 . chapter 7
LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUR STORY!

PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE!
PRQ 2007-06-04 . chapter 7
I adore this story. It's witty, inventive and romantic. They only complaint I have is that there hasn't been an update in a very, very long time. I hope that you haven't abandoned this story just because it's been almost a year since you've last updated. I know that when stories are this good, people will read them and periodically check for updates. Please update soon
Woods' Rose 2007-05-02 . chapter 7
I am a new member, but I LOVE your story! It is amazing, so pleasepleasepleaseplease update. please, if i havent already said that. Thanks!!
Update! 2007-04-01 . chapter 6
Please, please update! I'm dying to know what happens next. What happens at the ball?
desperately seeking chapter 8 2007-02-16 . chapter 7
You swear to update before mid August of WHAT YEAR!

Don't trick us this way, I mean it's February 2007! (The Valentine Vampire story was great by the way, I hope it inspired you to WRITE UPDATES!)

Ok, I'm here to GUILT you GUILT you GUILT you into updating!

You're KILIN US here!!

;) =) :)
Falling Envy 2007-02-06 . chapter 1
Please dont tell me you have given up on this fanfic. This is a wonderful story line you have going here. Just a short chapter would do, I check to see if you have updated like 4 times a week. Please *on my knees* im begging you just a small update pretty please with a cherry on top *puppy eyes*

~Falling Envy~
Pitiful Update Beggar 2007-02-04 . chapter 1
You said we could feel free to kick your butt into gear in an attempt to get you to update more often!
So...UPDATE ALREADY!

Come on, PLZ, at least a tidbit ... a short chapter ... something ... ANYTHING!

This is beautifully written, the charactor development is great, the story line holds our interest, the mysterious history between Shay and Anders is KILLING US! I mean, this is right up there with Pirate Princess, Love and Redemption, and Out of the Blue.

UPDATE ... UPDATE ... UPDATE ... UPDATE ... UPDATE ;)
gypsyhick 2007-01-31 . chapter 7
Uh oh! I'm addicted to this story, but...but...but...it's not being updated! Oh no! Don't leave us hanging!!

Hello out there!

Please!

Really, this story is FANTABULOUS! I never expected the direction it seems to be going -- well, yeah, I expected Shay and Anders would become allies, but I didn't expect the depth of the story line, the abuse aspect.

I gotta know what happens! How's it all resolved?!!

Please ... come back...!
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