I loved that! So so so cute! I love Purin and Tart together! Wonderfuly done! I can't even tell you how much I enjoyed that. It was so cuteness and funny.

Aw, this one was so cute! I love how conniving Purin is and you got both of my favorite characters in character. ^_^

KYA XD
WO GO TART! GO PUDDING !
AWESOME STORY ^^

what a cute story! tart and pudding forever i cant belive tart got a date all my friend saw this and said aww...how cute!! make more cute storys of tart and pudding

KAAWWAI! You should do a sequel :D

AW KAWAII! PLZZ do a chapter 2!!

OMG!

So cute!

BYE

BODB

Aw that oneshot was soo cute PLEASE make it a proper story!

so cute!I hope you cna update son! ^.^

brilliant fanfic! LOVE! make more, more , more, na no da! :bounces around like bunny on crack, sees this fanfic: YUM! sugary candy goodness!

TARUTO: ...

::glomps Cerulean San:: more more!

TARUTO: she's even more annoying than Pudding.

::PURIN pops up and kisses him:: did you say something Taru-Taru?

TARUTO:..::Blushes::

::Laughs insanely::

Ja Ne!:D :)

FirestormAngelBlaze

Awesome story, it makes me want to write yet another TxP oneshot, even though I should be working on my darned Teen Titans fic. ^.^;

It was very well composed, and the concept was original and sweet. PURIN TARUTO FO EVAH, YO! *brick'd*

Really cute!

yes tart i am going to reveiw this so "HA!" i will put you in one of my story as of ichigo saying to you as you makin out pudding and tart sittin in a tree k.i.s.s.i.n.g. first comes love then comes marriage then comes the baby in the baby carriage!
tart: u r so evil.
spider fairy: i am to u because u r easy of fun to make fun of and in reality i have friends, 'human' friends.
pai:why is spider fairy pooring mustard over tart?
tart: get it off me!
Zakuro:PAI! there is mustard over flowing in the hou- what is spider fairy doing...
(pai pulls her closer and whispers it in her ear.)
Zakuro: WHAT! THAT IS THE LARGEST BOTTLE AND IT CAN OVER FLOW A HOUSE!
Pai:sh
pudding; tart is getting torchered i must save him mew mew pudding metiphorphsis!
Spider fairy; it's on, MEW MEW SPIDER FAIRY ,METIPHORPHSIS!
Zakuro; not again, MEW MEW ZAKURO METIPHOTPHSIS!
Ichigo; sweet. MEW MEW ICHIGO METIPHORPHSIS!

mint;AGAIN! MEW MEW MINTO METIPHORPHSIS!
Retasu; MEW MEW LETTUCE METIPHORPHSIS!
RIBBON ZAKURO SPEAR!(ATTACKS SPIDER FAIRY.)
WEB DANCING RIBBON!(ATTACKS ZAKURO BACK
RIBBON STRAWBERRY CHECK! THIS IS FOR SIPPING FREAKIN TEA ALL DAY WHEN YOU SHOULD BE WORKIN!
RIBBON MONTO ECHO( ACIDENTLY ATTACKS ZAKURO BUT PAI JUMPS IN FRONT OF HER AS IT CUTS HIS SHOULDER.)
zakuro; pai!
pai;i don't want to see you get hurt...
zakuro; pai...
spider fairy; oh shut up watch(magicaly heals pai.)
spider fairy; i really don't give a crap but i just like messin with ya. well update soon

GO NORMAL BOY HORMONES! Just one correction. You wrote: "Purin sighed, and let his tongue explore his mouth" that is inncorect it should be: "and let HER tongue explore his mouth" Sorry for nit picking but I want this fic to be the best it can be. I believe this is also my second coment on this story.

Way cute!