| Reviews for Flawed |
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BiblioMatsuri 3/27/13 . chapter 6One of, if not the best YYH/HP crossovers I've ever read, and it's a deadfic with 6 lousy chapters. Are your dropped stories up for adoption? That way there's at least hope it'll be continued. |
BiblioMatsuri 7/17/12 . chapter 5Boggart. Rowling used them as a plot device. Fanfic writers in general use them for A) exposition about a transplanted character's worst fears and B) angst. You used it for sheer utter scary, on account of guess what Yusuke's worst fear is? (Hint: he's descended from a man-eating demon.) |
tsukinopen 12/7/11 . chapter 6too bad the plot didn't start yet! |
tsukinopen 12/7/11 . chapter 4lol dumbledore should use watakushi or something |
Heir of Rage 8/10/11 . chapter 6...i'm sad now...i shouldnt have read this and gotten my hopes up! *pouts* |
silverfairy 5/19/11 . chapter 6 Wow! This is a good story, one of the few good YYHxHP crossovers I've read. Sadly, I think it's discontinued DX Please update soon, judging by the reviews, I think a lot will celebrate if story gets an update. |
Robin Autumn 5/13/11 . chapter 6Yes it's been six years since you've updated. Yes this is probably abandoned, just like Mission X. But yes, I am reviewing anyways, in the vain hope that you will find renewed interest in this story. :) Cause I really like it! |
BeyondMyReach 4/20/11 . chapter 6Beautifully written. It's truly a pity that you're not going to continue this fic. I would have enjoy seeing the egg hatching. |
starkmaddness 7/19/10 . chapter 6Its pretty rare to find crossover fics, but even rarer to find ones that are written seriously and executed with believable character interactions and plot (instead of crossover crackfics just blown out of an author's ass for laughs, though those are fun to read also). If you ever decide to continue this story, I'll be one reader willing and giddy to review, because this fanfiction is nothing short of aMAZING! And #($& (*#$ it's so exciting to read the yu yu hakusho and HP universe colliding and GAAAAAAAAAAAH! I was practically giggling and slapping myself in euphoria reading it! Thank you for writing this |
Phamtom of the Pie 6/22/10 . chapter 6This is one of the best I've read! I picked up on a few minor mistakes, but otherwise the writing flows well and the characterization's great. I know it's useless to say, but I really do hope you haven't given up on this story. |
Vuurvlieg 6/9/10 . chapter 6Ow man, awesome. It's about time Yusuke started acting like himself again, being helpless doesn't suit him. I like the hint to how much Yusuke trusts Hiei. The fact that he is allowed to look into his head. I'm kinda missing Hiei and Kurama in this one. Understandable that they can't come (especially Hiei since he is a full demon) but I mis them even as I read the story. It's been a (long) wile but can I wine about more updates? |
KuroAngelique 2/27/10 . chapter 6Oh god I love this. This is one amazing fic. I do hope you'll update this; it's too awesome to be abandoned. |
dream.for.a.dream 9/11/09 . chapter 2Oh my God. The ending was absolutely brilliant. The story was funny and interesting and it sounds wonderful, but I am so not reading the next chapters before it has at least ten. I'd get annoyed if I had to stop so soon. Really great. Really really great. |
Serenity Moon2 9/2/09 . chapter 6This story is rather interesting. Never read a crossover combo like this one before. I wonder what kind of trouble Yusuke will find himself in once he gets to the school. Though what he gets himself into in the house is great as well. Ah, the fun of discovery, how ever painful it may be. |
irezel 2/2/09 . chapter 6you are so crule :'( i so wanted to read the rest of this because it was becoming so interesting! i just about to click the "next" button when there was none...it would be nice if you could pick this up again...i would really enjoy it :) |